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#1157718 - 10/13/19 01:52 PM I Have My Girl (C. Kiphen)  
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I have composed a melody for this lyric by Carroll Kiphen.

Listen to it: My voice + ukulele
https://app.box.com/s/9rxg0xspzt3dj4t1lwza39r4s5k0ga01

I Have My Girl
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
© Lyrics: Carroll Kiphen, 2019.
© Melody: Guy E. Trepanier, 2019.

Intro: 4 bars (key of C)

I donít need your religion.
I donít need your promised land.
I have a perfect angel
To love and hold my hand.

Sheís my paradise.
She is my whole world.
You can have heaven.
I have my girl.


I donít need any treasure.
I donít need diamonds or gold.
I have a priceless jewel
To hold and call my own.

Sheís my paradise.
She is my whole world.
You can have heaven.
I have my girl.


You can take all my possessions.
Just leave me one thing.
Cause I will always be wealthy.
While she wears my ring.

Instrumental: 8 bars

I donít need your religion.
I donít need your promised land.
I have a perfect angel
To love and hold my hand.

Sheís my paradise.
She is my whole world.
You can have heaven.
I have my girl.

Sheís my paradise.
She is my whole world.
You can have heaven.
I have my girl.


You can have heaven.
I have my girl.


K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
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#1157732 - 10/13/19 05:18 PM Re: I Have My Girl (C. Kiphen) [Re: Guy E. Trepanier]  
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Hello Guy ...

Good to "meet" you. I really like what you've done with Carroll's lyric. Love the chord arrangement and you vocal sounds really good. That was a real pleasant listen! best to you ...

Alan

#1157777 - 10/14/19 04:38 PM Re: I Have My Girl (C. Kiphen) [Re: Guy E. Trepanier]  
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Sweet lyrics and such a nice melody - good collaboration you two. I enjoyed the listen.

#1157857 - 10/17/19 01:32 AM Re: I Have My Girl (C. Kiphen) [Re: Guy E. Trepanier]  
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Hey Guy,

Living here in Fiji, I always appreciate a uke and an island song. smile

Yep, not so bad. It could do with a vocal tidy up, but has a catchy hook and a simple island feel.

There are a couple of lines which are syllable heavy...

Cause I will always be wealthy.

and...

I donít need your promised land.

...which could do with a chop.

You may like to revise I donít need your religion. which may offend some listeners.

Other than that, it's a cute song with a simple message and a memorable hook and melody.

cheers, niteshift


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