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#1154679 - 06/28/19 12:53 PM First Love, last love  
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Gonna do a rough Guitar/VOX this weekend, but wanna see how this reads on it's own.


First love, last love
© 2019 Steve Altonian

Moonlight dances upon your hair

Your eyes light up the sky

You slip your hand inside of mine

You hold me tight and smile a little smile


I feel your heart beating underneath my skin

I kiss your tender lips and whisper in your ear


First love, last love

Sharing dreams and memories

First love, last love

Sometimes baby, love is meant to be



I’ve come to call you my best friend

You’re a candle to my soul

A yellow rose in the desert snow

I have grown from the seeds you've sewn


Girl you know me a bit better than myself

You gently show me exactly who I am


First love, last love

Sharing dreams and memories

First love, last love

Sometimes baby, love is meant to be



BRIDGE

Still can taste that first kiss

It gets sweeter and sweeter all the time

You’re my favorite song

My love’s still burning strong…….for you


First love, last love

Sharing dreams and memories

First love, last love

Sometimes baby, love is meant to be

Sometimes baby, love is meant to be....

Last edited by Steve Altonian; 06/28/19 12:54 PM.

Steve Altonian---"I'll just do my best & let God do the rest"

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#1154691 - 06/28/19 08:20 PM Re: First Love, last love [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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First love, last love
Sharing dreams and memories
First love, ONLY love
Sometimes baby, love is meant to be................. forever

Really not much here to nit-pick. Love the simple sentiment. Perhaps a line about how rare it is for a "first love" to last? Can’t wait to hear it smile

#1156670 - 09/20/19 12:14 PM Re: First Love, last love [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Final Studio Version is up in the MP3 Forum


Steve Altonian---"I'll just do my best & let God do the rest"

http://www.stevealtonian.com
#1156772 - 09/22/19 08:26 AM Re: First Love, last love [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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I like the lyrics Steve :-)

#1156783 - 09/22/19 02:28 PM Re: First Love, last love [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Hi nice song,
you're a candle to my soul

great line
all the best.john


please vist
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=429802
to hear my lyrics recorded by musicians world wide

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