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#1156669 - 09/20/19 01:14 PM NOW  
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©luna simone

V1
Wherever you're at
If it's good
If it's bad
Step back and
Realize
Even if you can't change
Or make plans

CHORUS
Now is all you've got
Don't give up yet
Even if you feel it coming
Accept and love
Live and laugh
Who you are
Is worth all you have
Be here now
The need to care is what you face
You gotta make it happen
Somehow
Make it now

V2
When they say
Keep your chin up
Through sickness
And health
Take that voice
Into account
Don't feel hurt
When you get brought down

CHORUS
Now is all you've got
Don't give up yet
Even if you feel it coming
Accept and love
Live and laugh
Who you are
Is worth all you have
Be here now
The need to care is what you face
You gotta make it happen somehow
How about now?

BRIDGE
Everything matters
More than you realize
For the worst
Or better
Things will change
Take grasp of
The courage you know you have
You gotta make the change
How about
How about
How
How about now...

(instrumentals)

CHORUS
Now is all you've got
Don't give up yet
Even if you feel it coming
Accept and love
Live and laugh
Who you are
Is worth all you have
Be here now
The need to care is what you face
You gotta make it happen somehow
How about now?

(rep chorus 3 more times)


Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions.
Art is the journey of a free soul.
-Alev Oguz
http://soundcloud.com/lunarsimonamusic
#1156671 - 09/20/19 01:17 PM Re: NOW [Re: LunaSimone]  
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I decided to alter the chorus as it's kinda wordy so i copy-pasted and took out some of the lines, or one anyway.

Now is all you've got
Don't give up yet
Even if you feel it coming
Accept and love
Live and laugh
Who you are
Is worth all you have
The need to care is what you face
You gotta make it happen somehow
How about now?

Yep, so far i think one line is good.
Looking forward to critique and comment!
Can't wait to do the MP3, i like this song...


Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions.
Art is the journey of a free soul.
-Alev Oguz
http://soundcloud.com/lunarsimonamusic
#1156713 - 09/21/19 02:20 AM Re: NOW [Re: LunaSimone]  
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Don't give up...... Yet?

Now is all you've got
Don't ever give up
Tomorrow keeps coming
Accept and love
Live and laugh
Who you are
Is worth all you have
Fight the good fight every round
Live like every moment counts
How about now?

#1156729 - 09/21/19 11:43 AM Re: NOW [Re: LunaSimone]  
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Hi Luna, I am moving this to the Lyric Feedback board. I also updated your name per your request!


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