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#1156240 - 09/01/19 02:45 PM FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle  
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VERSION 2....So I got 1 more day to get this finished product into the Radio Station...Made a few changes in script & speed and it is now in Pro Tools to automate. As per popular opinion dumpored the ya'll come back now ya hear line....Brought up intro & Outro

More concerned with levels at this point. Balance between Music & VO, with automation now it is a simpler fix....
I know it's a Holiday, but please fire away. This is the first Jingle I've written & this is my first VO, but I want ALL input...Don't be shy, let her fly

FINAL Ask The Credit Cowboy Jingle & Radio Commercial




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#1156242 - 09/01/19 03:12 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Hi Steve,

I am not really an expert at final production - I played it twice - sounds pretty clear - your voice is recorded good - but I find the recording to be a little low for my ears. Maybe the mastering part will help bring the volume up just a bit - Music is still a little low - but maybe that's okay for a commercial. Good luck on this Credit Cowboy!

Jane

#1156247 - 09/01/19 05:23 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Much better! Now just run it through a heavy multi band compressor and balance everything out smile

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#1156261 - 09/01/19 07:19 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: JaneK]  
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Originally Posted by JaneK
Hi Steve,

I am not really an expert at final production - I played it twice - sounds pretty clear - your voice is recorded good - but I find the recording to be a little low for my ears. Maybe the mastering part will help bring the volume up just a bit - Music is still a little low - but maybe that's okay for a commercial. Good luck on this Credit Cowboy!

Jane



Jane, I brought the music up slightly as others have said the same thing. Is it better now, without being dominating?

the Mastering will bring up overall volunme...Just want to make certain balance is there


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#1156262 - 09/01/19 07:26 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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This sounds great Steve. Just played on my laptop speaker volume about midway - loud enough and very clear.

#1156263 - 09/01/19 08:11 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: JaneK]  
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Originally Posted by JaneK
This sounds great Steve. Just played on my laptop speaker volume about midway - loud enough and very clear.



Thanks Jane....AFTER YOUR COMMENT I just used an Online Mastering after you listened....I have no Mastering stuff so I rolled with it...Thoughts?


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#1156265 - 09/01/19 09:45 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Oops I guess I got here too late - Can't pull it up.

#1156268 - 09/02/19 04:04 AM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Better Steve!

John smile

#1156363 - 09/09/19 03:45 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Thanks everyone for your help...I heard this on the Radio on Saturday as it led off the program and the FINAL VERSION was great....I got 4 phone calls & emails from the ad for buiness as well. So the ad is working


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#1156364 - 09/09/19 04:28 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Cool Steve! Hope you get a lot more of this work!

Best, John smile

#1156379 - 09/10/19 10:57 PM Re: FINAL VERSION? The Credit Cowboy Radio VO & Jingle [Re: Steve Altonian]  
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Hey Steve,

Good luck with this!

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