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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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another attempt at a song that doubles that splitting with a friend or breaking up. Advice or comments, whatever, drop it all below! Highly appreciated folks ©luna simone v1 Nothing like moving on Some people cry for crying out loud Some are good at being strong PRECHOR Believe it or not, there is an inbetween They say the best way to love and forgive others Is to love yourself It's just I can't help but say I start feeling stranger the more I walk away CHORUS Believe me I'm being honest When I say It'll take time to search myself out Cause when I look into myself I don't see who I was quite the same way All I know it's somehow better The more I fight the demons In myself that you left with me There’s nothing like letting go And freeing self of toxicity. v2 Nothing like moving on Some people cry for crying out loud Yet some will go with the flow feel the fever As they become brand new in the snap of a finger PRECHOR I envy those people wondering if they envy me But then again if feeling revenge Is all the world will see So I guess that I can’t help but say The world may change but I will be the same CHORUS Believe me I'm being honest When I say It'll take time to search myself out Cause when I look into myself I don't see who I was quite the same way All I know it's somehow better The more I fight the demons In myself that you left with me There's nothing like letting go And freeing self of toxicity. REPEAT CHOR AND BOTH PRECHORUSES Believe me I'm being honest When I say It'll take time to search myself out Cause when I look into myself I don't see who I was quite the same way All I know it's somehow better The more I fight the demons In myself that you left with me There's nothing like letting go of it all And freeing self of toxicity. (v1) Nothing like moving on Some people cry for crying out loud Some are good at being strong (v2) Nothing like moving on Some people cry for crying out loud Some even go with the flow feel the fever As they become brand new in the snap of a finger Believe me I'm being honest When I say It'll take time to search myself out Cause when I look into myself I don't see who I was quite the same way All I know it's somehow better The more I fight the demons In myself that you left with me There's nothing like letting go And freeing self of toxicity.
Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions. Art is the journey of a free soul. -Alev Oguz http://soundcloud.com/lunasimone
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"I start feeling stranger the more I walk away" This line jumps out at me! Love it! Check out "Untitled" in creative writing, would like your thoughts!
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An outpouring from the heart and soul with some stellar thoghts to ponder. i enjoyed this set of lyrics.
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Hi I thought it was a bit to wordy, felt like a long way to verse one, but oozes emotion. all the best,john.
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