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#1155807 - 08/10/19 01:16 PM "ALL THE FEELS" A true love song.  
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©luna simone
v1
One day at a coffee shop
I saw a man I couldn't pass up
Weird to say yes I fear
But I tried not to break into tears

v2
I'd been doing my best
To live my own life
Guess it's true about soulmates
It's much better
When you see the world clearer

CHORUS
It's more than just butterflies
More than outer appearances
And the truth about love
Once you put two and two together
Mutuality is what sets you free
And makes romance what it should be

v3
One thing leads to another
But I hate the very thing that that means
When I looked into his eyes
It cued for intellectual talk to take flight

v4
To believe in yourself
Is to believe who you're worth
It's more than just a kiss
Or the love making deal

PRE CHORUS
When you come into yourself
You start experiencing all the right feels


CHORUS
It's more than just butterflies
More than outer appearances
And the truth about love
Once you put two and two together
Mutuality is what sets you free
And makes romance what it should be

BRIDGES
v1
Forget all the cliches
You gotta get married
Start a family
Get that perfect place to live

v2
If you're like me that's hard to believe
It's not that it is what it is
It's easier to see the point of relating than what you think

REP CHROUS
It's more than just butterflies
More than outer appearances
And the truth about love
Once you put two and two together
Mutuality is what sets you free
And makes romance what it should be

It's more than just butterflies
More than outer appearances
And the truth about love
Once you put two and two together
Mutuality is what sets you free
And makes romance what it should be

It's more than just butterflies
More than outer appearances
And the truth about love
Once you put two and two together
Mutuality is what sets you free
And makes romance what it should be


Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions.
Art is the journey of a free soul.
-Alev Oguz
http://soundcloud.com/lunarsimonamusic
#1155861 - 08/14/19 11:16 AM Re: "ALL THE FEELS" A true love song. [Re: LunaSimone]  
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TWO THINGS HERE It's preaching ?? like the singer is an

expert on love and life, better to state the sentiment is something

you have learned by experience; like most of us do


The other outstanding thing at this stage, that needs correcting

is the syllable count of each corresponding line in your verses

they should match up ???? get those right and the music could

sound memorable

Keep at it its certainly worth pursuing


One of the most important principles of songwriting is to remember that a good song is a partnership of many different components, all working together to produce a satisfying musical experience.

In that respect, song components are either enhancing or compromising their combined effects.

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