Yes, this will as a recording seriously take a nod to Tool - especially now that they are finally back with a new, legit to their original concepts single,
whether you like their music or not.
Hate to say, opinionate what you want but society and the way the lead singer views it really inspires me, as I'm a pretty big fan of theirs. If you are curious about how their music paints the big picture you're pretty much required to listen to their music to feel this. I'm hoping for critique and thoughts so please send me some my way!

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v1
give up your television
submit your contradiction
bite me I wonít give up
state my dark thesis
Iím dead set on composition

CHORUS
Can you rectify me
Try to prophecy me
Give into the machine
I refuse to let live
Rather be above it
Cause Iím late to bloom
May not be proud of it
But somehow I am

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v2
Ask and you indeed receive
Pretend that you still believe
Line in the sand you draw
So blurred Iíll kick your walls
This is not war
But Iíll make a proposition I know I can keep

CHORUS
Can you rectify me
Try to prophecy me
Give into the machine
I refuse to let live
Rather be above it
Cause Iím late to bloom
May not be proud of it
But somehow I am

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(instrumental break)

BRIDGE
How many times do I
Have to say no to you
You grew up to refuse
I know Iím no teacher
No therapist
Authority
You wanna steal my soul
Itís not gonna work
Cause itís fast against
Your world chaotic

CHROUS
Can you rectify me
Try to prophecy me
Give into the machine
I refuse to let live
Rather be above it
Cause Iím late to bloom
May not be proud of it
But somehow I am

Manifest
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CLOSING VERSE
You canít rule the world
Without some kind of integrity
You canít power over
The millions of clones that you see
You know that Iím not one of them
And you want to just
Take advantage of me

Ask and you shallllll reeeecieve.

Last edited by LunaSimone; 08/10/19 01:24 PM.

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Art is the journey of a free soul.
-Alev Oguz
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