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"Dreamin' Big Dreams", Wake Up And Go For Them
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Well! Just when I was gettin' all my bottles together!
There will always be another song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? www.garyeandrews.com
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Hi Gary, I hope you wrote a delightful song with that idea You are a genius when it comes to this kind of thing Please, please, pretty please.... post it..Yeah!!! Don't keep it, "All Bottled Up"..yeah (0) credit to me, Fran
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I hadn't written anything but I was getting ideas. I'm always looking for that character in the story, the Singer-Character who can tell you about his 'bottles'. I had an idea of the guy who remembered his Momma giving him a bottle, and that's where all his troubles began! LOL I think your next 'bottle' was alcohol. Was the third one 'medicine bottles'? Anyway, I started to see that progression through life, which I think is what you were imaginatin'!
Here's one, spur o' the moment!
All Bottled Up
(Verse I)
I remember Momma, sayin', "He was my bottle baby!" I listened to her talk, about how I was so crazy! She said, "I know it's because, I didn't breastfeed him enough!" Now I think it's all her fault, I'm All Bottled Up!
(Chorus)
I keep my feelings to myself! I don't talk to no one else! No one knows what's on my mind! I'm All Bottled Up, all the time! All Bottled Up! All Bottled Up!
(Verse II)
I talk to bartenders, about beer and the baseball game. I don't tell 'em nothin', about the things that cause me shame! I always wear sunglasses, I keep my windows covered up! Yes I think it's Momma's fault, I'm All Bottled Up!
I keep my feelings to myself! I don't talk to no one else! No one knows what's on my mind! I'm All Bottled Up, all the time! All Bottled Up! All Bottled Up!
(Bridge)
Nurse Ratchett and the Doctor, made a recommendation. They said I could feel better, if I took their medication. I took one pill and don't you know I saw the devil in my coffee up. I ain't lettin' no Doctor, get me All Bottled Up!
I keep my feelings to myself! I don't talk to no one else! No one knows what's on my mind! I'm All Bottled Up, all the time! No one knows what's on my mind! I'm All Bottled Up, all the time! All Bottled Up! All Bottled Up!
There will always be another song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? www.garyeandrews.com
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I hadn't written anything but I was getting ideas. I'm always looking for that character in the story, the Singer-Character who can tell you about his 'bottles'. I had an idea of the guy who remembered his Momma giving him a bottle, and that's where all his troubles began! LOL I think your next 'bottle' was alcohol. Was the third one 'medicine bottles'? Anyway, I started to see that progression through life, which I think is what you were imaginatin'!
Here's one, spur o' the moment!
All Bottled Up
(Verse I)
I remember Momma, sayin', "He was my bottle baby!" I listened to her talk, about how I was so crazy! She said, "I know it's because, I didn't breastfeed him enough!" Now I think it's all her fault, I'm All Bottled Up!
(Chorus)
I keep my feelings to myself! I don't talk to no one else! No one knows what's on my mind! I'm All Bottled Up, all the time! All Bottled Up! All Bottled Up!
(Verse II)
I talk to bartenders, about beer and the baseball game. I don't tell 'em nothin', about the things that cause me shame! I always wear sunglasses, I keep my windows covered up! Yes I think it's Momma's fault, I'm All Bottled Up!
I keep my feelings to myself! I don't talk to no one else! No one knows what's on my mind! I'm All Bottled Up, all the time! All Bottled Up! All Bottled Up!
(Bridge)
Nurse Ratchett and the Doctor, made a recommendation. They said I could feel better, if I took their medication. I took one pill and don't you know I saw the devil in my coffee up. I ain't lettin' no Doctor, get me All Bottled Up!
I keep my feelings to myself! I don't talk to no one else! No one knows what's on my mind! I'm All Bottled Up, all the time! No one knows what's on my mind! I'm All Bottled Up, all the time! All Bottled Up! All Bottled Up!
Hi Gary, You have written a hit song It's all yours Baby I love it, it's so cool...Good luck with it..:) Fran
"Dreamin' Big Dreams", Wake Up And Go For Them
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