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#1154981 - 07/08/19 09:02 AM Alone  
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- Select One - houston, texas...
Alone
I stand alone
Alone
Not a soul in sight.
I stand alone
Alone
In the dark of night.

Around me I see eyes
Like stars in the skies.
Watching me, watching me.
I try not to cry.

The darkness seems endless.
Itís so cold and deep.
More vast than an ocean.
What it takes it keeps.

I lie alone
Alone
Not a word is said.
I lie alone
Alone.
As if left for dead.

Around me I see eyes
Like stars in the skies.
Watching me, watching me.
They have all my life.
The hours drag slowly.
They must weigh a ton.
Donít flow like a river.
Like when I was young.

I stand alone.
Alone.
I fear what will come.
I stand alone.
Alone
Have since I was young.

No friends for support.
Donít throw me a rope.
Thereís no use in trying.
Thereís no longer hope.

I donít think I belong.
Feel I never did.
Iíve been alone
Alone
Since I was a kid.

The light out crying.
Alone.

#1154992 - 07/08/19 01:12 PM Re: Alone [Re: ckiphen]  
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This sounds like it has a ton of potential but it'd sound more manageable to critique if you can get a melody together. Just critiquing, but when do you think you could? I'd be curious to hear it, and I'm sure some others would as well!


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#1155049 - 07/09/19 07:10 PM Re: Alone [Re: ckiphen]  
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This is a great lyric. I think a melody written to the lyrics would make it very compelling


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