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#1154211 - 06/16/19 01:00 PM I'm Almost Halfway Through My Third Life.  
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https://media1-production.mightynetworks.com/asset/5598970/_Halfway_Through_My_Third_Life-MP3.mp3

Iím almost halfway through my third life
and I still got a ways to go
they sent me back here to get it right
but I failed again you know

Iíve bent some angels wings in sorrow
and God has threatened to
take all my tomorrows
and Iíve got no place to goÖÖ.

Cause Hellís got no room for me
I was never that bad
and in Heaven Iím a loser
the Saints are fit to be had.

Iíve struck out three times
and thatís the problem
that Iím dealing with
and any life after my third death
when Iíve taken my final breath
might be just a myth
cause I keep blowing the chances I get
and God never forgets.

And you might all laugh at me
cause your death is still a mystery
but thereíll come a day when youíll be
Living your second life
and I hope that youíll get it right.

Cause it doesnít have to go that way
take every minute of your life
that you spend each day
Making sure that you donít have to pay
Because you went astray
Because you went astray

Otherwise Iíll see you in your second life
while Iím finishing my Fourth
still trying to get it rightÖof course
still trying to get it right of course.


Art~Whimsically Yours studio
Matthew F. Blowers III-©-2019
With Credits to God for his patience
and toPixabay.com for their stellar pics

#1154229 - 06/16/19 10:09 PM Re: I'm Almost Halfway Through My Third Life. [Re: MFB III]  
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Hi Matt,

You've got a crooner's voice and you have good pitch. You seem adept enough on the guitar too.

I think if your tempo held together more consistently your song would benefit greatly, as in click tracking and overdubbing.

I enjoyed it anyway.

Mike


Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
#1154234 - 06/17/19 02:20 AM Re: I'm Almost Halfway Through My Third Life. [Re: MFB III]  
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Hi Matt
Great theme,well thought through lyric .
Good to see you back on the forum.
Best of luck with it
Travus


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1154235 - 06/17/19 02:57 AM Re: I'm Almost Halfway Through My Third Life. [Re: MFB III]  
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Hey Micheal and Travis thanks for your skilled critique and your comments. I do appreciate the listen. Too many family crisises have prevented my faithfulness here.
I am hoping things will settle down. Thanks again.


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