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v1 TAKE IT ALL AWAY FROM ME I HAVE BURNT TO FIRST DEGREE WISHING I COULD START ANEW WISHING YOU COULD ONLY SEE
v2 WE ARE MORE THAN ENEMIES WE'VE COMMITED FELONIES I'VE TRIED TO MAKE IT CLEAR BUT YOU ONLY WASH IT ALL AWAY
chorus I'M NOT ABOUT TO PLAY THE WAY YOU INSTIGATE I DON'T WANT TO BOSS YOU THE WAY YOU DO ME SO IF YOU CHOOSE TO CALL THIS AN EPIC LOSS I'M ALL THERE TO AGREE
verse 3 TAKE IT ALL AWAY FROM ME I HAVE BURNT TO FIRST DEGREE WISHING I COULD START ANEW WISHING YOU COULD ONLY SEE
verse 4 TRUST TO YOU IS OPTIONAL YOU TREAT ME LIKE I AM BENEATH YOU AND ALL THE THINGS YOU DO AS I FALL AND YOU JUST LAUGH AWAY
chorus I'M NOT ABOUT TO PLAY THE WAY YOU INSTIGATE I DON'T WANT TO BOSS YOU THE WAY YOU DO ME SO IF YOU CHOOSE TO CALL THIS AN EPIC LOSS I'M ALL THERE TO AGREE
bridge DON'T GET ON MY LEVEL IF YOU DON'T HAVE THE PASSION TO CHANGE YOU TREAT LOVE LIKE A GAME BUT IT'S JUST NOT THE SAME
repeat: I'M NOT ABOUT TO PLAY THE WAY YOU INSTIGATE I DON'T WANT TO BOSS YOU THE WAY YOU DO ME SO IF YOU CALL THIS AN EPIC LOSS I'M ALL THERE TO AGREE
Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions. Art is the journey of a free soul. -Alev Oguz http://soundcloud.com/lunasimone
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Hi Luna and although you have been a member for a fair while, I will still say welcome. I myself am a lyric writer, and a little while ago wrote my first and last hiphop with a rap verse lyrics. I have to say that it was one of the hardest lyrics I have ever written, having rhymes within lines as well as rhymes from line to line. Life's Tricks https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uu-nhed9oHII'm not sure if you are finished with these lyrics or are looking for suggestions, so I will ask before I see what I can offer. I think it has potential God Bless from me Roy
Last edited by Roy Cooper; 05/08/19 09:13 PM.
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Thanks Roy. I'll have a listen and respond ASAP after writing this, just wanted to say I'm wholly interested in your contribution to hip hop and glad you like it!
Last edited by LunaSimone; 05/09/19 01:11 PM.
Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions. Art is the journey of a free soul. -Alev Oguz http://soundcloud.com/lunasimone
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sounds good.
When you are ready to read, let me know and I will PM you some basics
God Bless from me
Roy
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