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Title: Daisy's On The Warpath All Rights Reserved, 09/21/2010 Writer: Fran Williams V1) We have all heard, hell has no fury Like a woman, when she feels scorned Never seen a woman go crazy like that Hide or Run, Daisy's On The Warpath Chorus) Starts showing her DNA History Daisy can't hold her bad temper When she's had a few too many She climbs down the family tree Instrumental break) Hide or Run, Daisy's On The Warpath Hide or Run, Daisy's On The Warpath V2) Daisy followed me to my favorite bar, was on the warpath, when she walked in Cursing, and throwing some beer bottles She hits my eye, and said let the fun begin Chorus)2 Starts showing her DNA History Daisy can't hold her bad temper When she's had a few too many She climbs down the family tree Bridge) Cowboys, you all better hunker down Hide or Run, Daisy's on the warpath Hide or Run, Daisy's on the warpath Chorus)3 Starts showing her DNA History Daisy, can't hold her bad temper When she's had a few too many She climbs down the family tree Tag) Daisy's on the warpath, mercy on me Daisy's climbing down the family tree Comments are appreciated!! Roots Run Deep Fran Williams
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I don't understand what "She's part Irish and Cherokee" means. I don't understand what "She starts climbing down the family tree" means. This lyric could be construed by some as racially slurring - kinda like the old Disney movies. Ugh.
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Thanks, for the advice and I made some changes to the storyline!! Best, Fran Williams
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That Daisy's hard to work with, Dancin' Fran. Don't tell her I said that. But I think I might have a tellin' of her tale you'll like. Check it out. Thanks a lot for introducing me to her. Ow!
Title: Daisy's On The War Path All Rights Reserved, 09/21/2010 Writer: Fran Williams
Verse I) I know you've all heard, "Hell hath no fury Like a woman, when she feels scorned!" I'm gonna tell you all about my woman, Daisy. So don't none of ya' say you ain't been warned.
I left in the middle of an argument, Said, "I'm goin' to the bar to have fun with my friends!" I didn't realize all my mistakes 'til Daisy walked in, Threw a beer bottle at me, Said, "Let the fun begin!"
(Chorus) When Daisy's On The Warpath, she becomes my bitter half. She'll fight and bite and pull my hair. Once she hit me with a kitchen chair! She just gets madder when I laugh, and say, "Daisy's On The Warpath! Daisy's On The Warpath!"
Verse II) Yes, it's true that hell hath no fury Like a woman, who's been provoked. Take care when your mouth flies open A cute little bitty bear gets bigger when it's poked!
Don't leave in the middle of an argument Only a damned fool would tell her exactly where he's goin'! Just about when I think the war has stopped, She finds more things I've done wrong. Venom starts a' flowin'!
(Chorus) When Daisy's On The Warpath, she becomes my bitter half. She'll fight and bite and pull my hair. Once she hit me with a kitchen chair! She just gets madder when I laugh, and say, "Daisy's On The Warpath! Daisy's On The Warpath!"
(Bridge) When you or she's had a few too many Don't say, "You're showin' your DNA History!" Don't tell 'er, "Now hold your temper!" That just makes her madder! She climbs down the family tree!
(Chorus) When Daisy's On The Warpath, she becomes my bitter half. She'll fight and bite and pull my hair. Once she hit me with a kitchen chair! She just gets madder when I laugh, and say, "Daisy's On The Warpath! Daisy's On The Warpath!"
(Coda: Spoken dialogue.) Com' on baby. Let's go home and talk about this. Com' on baby. Put that bottle down. You know I love ya. No, it don't hurt much. It'll quit bleedin' in a minute. No, better let me drive. No, I didn't mean nothin' by that! No! But, baby, I just...Ow! Okay. You drive. I'll meet ya back at the house.
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That Daisy's hard to work with, Dancin' Fran. Don't tell her I said that. But I think I might have a tellin' of her tale you'll like. Check it out. Thanks a lot for introducing me to her. Ow!
Title: Daisy's On The Warpath All Rights Reserved, 09/21/2010 Writer: Fran Williams
Verse I) I know you've all heard, "Hell hath no fury Like a woman, when she feels scorned!" I'm gonna tell you all about my woman, Daisy. So don't none of ya' say you ain't been warned.
I left in the middle of an argument, Said, "I'm goin' to the bar to have fun with my friends!" I didn't realize all my mistakes 'til Daisy walked in, Threw a beer bottle at me, Said, "Let the fun begin!"
(Chorus) When Daisy's On The Warpath, she becomes my bitter half. She'll fight and bite and pull my hair. Once she hit me with a kitchen chair! She just gets madder when I laugh, and say, "Daisy's On The Warpath! Daisy's On The Warpath!"
Verse II) Yes, it's true that hell hath no fury Like a woman, who's been provoked. Take care when your mouth flies open A cute little bitty bear gets bigger when it's poked!
Don't leave in the middle of an argument Only a damned fool would tell her exactly where he's goin'! Just about when I think the war has stopped, She finds more things I've done wrong. Venom starts a' flowin'!
(Chorus) When Daisy's On The Warpath, she becomes my bitter half. She'll fight and bite and pull my hair. Once she hit me with a kitchen chair! She just gets madder when I laugh, and say, "Daisy's On The Warpath! Daisy's On The Warpath!"
(Bridge) When you or she's had a few too many Don't say, "You're showin' your DNA History!" Don't tell 'er, "Now hold your temper!" That just makes her madder! She climbs down the family tree!
(Chorus) When Daisy's On The Warpath, she becomes my bitter half. She'll fight and bite and pull my hair. Once she hit me with a kitchen chair! She just gets madder when I laugh, and say, "Daisy's On The Warpath! Daisy's On The Warpath!"
(Coda: Spoken dialogue.) Com' on baby. Let's go home and talk about this. Com' on baby. Put that bottle down. You know I love ya. No, it don't hurt much. It'll quit bleedin' in a minute. No, better let me drive. No, I didn't mean nothin' by that! No! But, baby, I just...Ow! Okay. You drive. I'll meet ya back at the house. Title: Daisy's On The Warpath Date: 09/21/2010 Writers: Gary E. Andrews/ Fran Williams Hi Gary, this is so funny and I love all the awesome changes! I can see a demo and video with this new version. You really amaze me sometimes..That Daisy Gal, is so hot to handle! Better hide or run if she comes around Warpath well traveled, Dancin' Fran
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