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#1152716 - 04/16/19 07:04 AM Dumpster Of Broken Hearts  
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Dumpster Of Broken Hearts

(C) 2019 Geneva Griffin

V1
She had me in her hands, ever since 3rd grade
She walked me with her tomboy pitchin arm
I got my 2nd hard knock, standing off 1st base
Her daddy was ump and she won both our hearts

CH
Dumpster of broken hearts
Let me dive in and dig deep
Wash my hands of her little ways
Pick and choose sweet memories
Toss away these heavy woes
Heave my hurt over the top
There'll be not much left carry
When I bury all this hurt
In the dumpster of broken hearts

V2
I loved that girl, on the day I made her mine
She still played for wins at childish games
I thought in time, she'da learned that ain't right
Our loosing kinda love lead to heartbreak

CH
Dumpster of broken hearts
Let me dive in and dig deep
Wash my hands of her little ways
Pick and choose sweet memories
Toss away these heavy woes
Heave my hurt over the top
There'll be not much left to carry
When I bury all this hurt
In the dumpster of broken hearts

BRIDGE
She cried on my porch when we both were ten
Her old tom cat crossed the road and it got hit
I know I'll never hear her sob like that again
But if I'm wrong, I'll never get things sorted out

CH
Dumpster of broken hearts
Let me dive in and dig deep
Wash my hands of her little ways
Pick and choose sweet memories
Toss away these heavy woes
Heave my hurt over the top
There'll be not much left to carry
When I bury all this hurt
In the dumpster of broken hearts

Last edited by nightengale; 05/24/19 07:27 PM.
#1152805 - 04/19/19 10:18 AM Re: Dumpster Of Broken Hearts [Re: nightengale]  
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These 2 lines seem to contradict each other
Maybe switch them

She shook me up, threw my heart away
Then she held it in the palm of her hands

She hugged and kissed me, but I was had
Used her old rag doll exactly the same
She held me in the palm of her hands
Shook me up... threw my heart away

#1152813 - 04/20/19 12:57 AM Re: Dumpster Of Broken Hearts [Re: nightengale]  
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Thank you Neil,

I rewrote v1 hoping to make it clearer

Geneva

#1152878 - 04/23/19 05:19 AM Re: Dumpster Of Broken Hearts [Re: nightengale]  
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You always tell a good story Gen.
I like the hook it sums love,loss cheating and what follows very well.
Thought i'd get back into writing again. Good luck with your doggy projects
Regards
John


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1153285 - 05/10/19 09:32 PM Re: Dumpster Of Broken Hearts [Re: nightengale]  
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Thank Travis,
My pups are a handful.

So glad your writing

Geneva

Last edited by nightengale; 05/10/19 09:32 PM.

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