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#1152685 - 04/14/19 10:48 AM Hosed  
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- Select One - houston, texas...
Hosed
Verse
I planted those rose bushes.
Built that picket fence.
Raised two kinds inside that house.
Taught them common sense.
Pre chorus
I donít live there anymore.
Some other Sancho does.
Treats her better than I did.
He shows her heís in love.
Chorus
Thereís a stranger in the yard.
Holding my old hoe.
Tending to her garden
With his water hose.
Verse
I painted that rose trellis.
Paved that patio.
Thought she was in love with me
Thought that weíd grow old.
Pre chorus
I donít live there anymore.
Some other Sancho does.
Treats her better than I did.
He shows her heís in love.
Chorus
Thereís a stranger in the yard.
Holding my old hoe.
Tending to her garden
With his water hose.
Bridge
Took care of her for ten long years.
Tried to make a house a home.
Now a stranger tends her garden
While Iím out in the cold.
Tag
I canít help but feeling like
Iíve been hosed.

#1152690 - 04/14/19 03:53 PM Re: Hosed [Re: ckiphen]  
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Nothing like getting hosed by the old ho.
"Some other Sancho" while unique, may be a problem for some(why "Sancho"?)
What are you trying to express here? It just sounds like a lament that some one else got your wife. Nobody wants to hear just that.
But the audience wants to know why and you don't deliver an explanation.
How does he treat her better than you? Why after ten years and two kids(not kinds) would she leave?
Is she hot and you're not? Did you ignore her, bore her or fail to adore her?

Summeoyo

#1152691 - 04/14/19 04:02 PM Re: Hosed [Re: ckiphen]  
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Welcome Caroll,
I like where you're going with this. I'd like to hear some back story also to connect me with the singer.
I need to feel some kind of emotion.

An example would be Toby Keith's
Who's That Man.

You're off to a good start.

Geneva


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