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Title: Sexy Man Card
Writers: Fran Williams/ Gary E. Andrews
Date: 01/11/2019/All rights reserved

V1)
I got my reality check
on Saturday Night
Before I could say, Hi
She said, "take a Hike!"
I'm tryin' hard to raise the bar,
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"

V2)
I'm working out down on the farm
Riding bikes, taking that hike!
I eat better, tryin' to do no harm
Walkin' more! Parkin' my car!
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"

Chorus)
I'm lookin' for a woman
at least as sexy as me
I know I've been barkin'
Up the wrong tree!
I ain't tryin' to be a movie star
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"!

( Background Singers) (for a video)
Hey sexy! Be Sexy,
Wherever you are!
He's sexy, She's sexy!
His, "Sexy Man Card"

V3)
I was mendin' the fence,
out by the main road
When, I heard her voice,
say, my car won't go
I saw her face! I saw Stars!
Tryin' to get my Sexy Man Card"!

Chorus 2)

Background Singers)
I ain't tryin' to be a movie star!
I'm tryin' to get my "Sexy Man Card"!

Background Singers).
Hey Sexy! Be Sexy!
Wherever you are!
He's sexy! She's Sexy!
His "Sexy Man Card"

He is, (PLAYING, his sexy man card)!!

Enjoy,
Fran Williams
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Originally Posted by F Williams
Title: Sexy Man Card
Writers: Fran Williams/ Gary E. Andrews
Date: 01/11/2019/All rights reserved

V1)
I got my reality check
on Saturday Night
Before I could say, Hi
She said, "take a Hike!"
I'm tryin' hard to raise the bar,
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"

V2)
I'm working out down on the farm
Riding bikes, taking that hike!
I eat better, tryin' to do no harm
Walkin' more! Parkin' my car!
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"

Chorus)
I'm lookin' for a woman
at least as sexy as me
I know I've been barkin'
Up the wrong tree!
I ain't tryin' to be a movie star
I'm tryin' to get my, "Sexy Man Card"!

( Background Singers) (for a video)
Hey sexy! Be Sexy,
Wherever you are!
He's sexy, She's sexy!
His, "Sexy Man Card"

V3)
I was mendin' the fence,
out by the main road
When, I heard her voice,
say, my car won't go
I saw her face! I saw Stars!
Tryin' to get my Sexy Man Card"!

Chorus 2)

Background Singers)
I ain't tryin' to be a movie star!
I'm tryin' to get my "Sexy Man Card"!

Background Singers).
Hey Sexy! Be Sexy!
Wherever you are!
He's sexy! She's Sexy!
His "Sexy Man Card"

He is, (PLAYING, his sexy man card)

Enjoy,
Fran Williams
cool cool


Folks, there is a female version of this song! Perhaps
Gary E. Andrews will post. It is very good!!

Dreams come true,
Fran


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Here tiz!

Here’s a woman’s POV rewrite. And the idea that maybe ‘play’ instead of ‘get’ might be better.

Title: “Sexy Woman Card”
Writer: Fran Williams (Lyrical assist, Gary E. Andrews. All Rights Reserved to Fran Williams.)
Copyright Date:1/11/19

V1)
I got my reality check
one Saturday night!
Before I could say “Hi!”
He said, “Take a hike!”
I’m tryin’ hard, to raise the bar,
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Woman Card!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Woman Card!

(V2)
I’m workin’ out, down on the farm
Walking more! Parkin’ my car!
Riding bikes, takin’ that hike!
I eat better, tryin’ to do no harm
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Woman Card!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Woman Card!

(Chorus)
I’m lookin’ for a man,
At least as sexy as me.
I know I’ve been barkin’,
Up the wrong tree!
I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Woman Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! He’s sexy!
Her Sexy Woman Card!

(V3)
I was mendin’ the fence,
out by the main road,
When I heard his voice,
say, “My car won’t go!”
I saw his face! I saw stars!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Woman Card!

(Chorus)
I’m lookin’ for a man,
At least as sexy as me.
I know I’ve been barkin’,
Up the wrong tree!
I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Woman Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! He’s sexy!
Her Sexy Woman Card!

I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Woman Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! He’s sexy!
Her Sexy Woman Card!


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I’m still spotting kinks in the flow of the Rhythm of the words, just reciting, without a Melody.

Here’s a line flip on V2 to align those farm/harm Hard Rhymes. And going with the ‘play’ of the card.

And I just realized V1 has 7 lines and V2 only had 6. See? You can jump the gun and spend money before a product is ready. I went back to your original ideas and brought ‘up before dawn’ back into the mix. You always have good ideas Fran!

Title: “Sexy Man Card”
Writer: Fran Williams (Lyrical assist, Gary E. Andrews. All Rights Reserved to Fran Williams.)
Copyright Date:1/11/19

V1)
I got my reality check
one Saturday night!
Before I could say “Hi!”
She said, “Take a hike!”
I’m tryin’ hard, to raise the bar,
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Man Card! (This is a Refrain-Type Chorus)
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Man Card!
(This repeat of the Refrain, meant to emphasize THE Hook, may be excessive, time-wise, and unnecessary. Recognizing that the title is THE Hook and it appears at the end of each Verse means the Song is getting the minimum number of requisite ‘hits’ to drive it home as the main idea, without the doubling in each Verse.)

(V2)
I’m walking more! Parkin’ my car!
Workin’ out, down on the farm
Riding bikes, takin’ that hike!
I eat better, tryin’ to do no harm
I’m up before dawn, out under the stars!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Man Card!

(Chorus) (This isn’t a Chorus; it’s a Bridge)
I’m lookin’ for a woman,
At least as sexy as me.
I know I’ve been barkin’,
Barkin’ up the wrong tree!
I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Man Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
He’s sexy! She’s sexy!
His Sexy Man Card!

(V3)
I was workin’ on the fence,
out by the main road,
When I heard her voice,
say, “My car won’t go!”
I saw her face! I saw stars!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Man Card!

(Bridge)
I’m lookin’ for a woman,
At least as sexy as me.
I know I’ve been barkin’,
Barkin’ up the wrong tree!
I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Man Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
He’s sexy! She’s sexy!
His Sexy Man Card!

I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Man Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
He’s sexy! He’s playin’!
His Sexy Man Card!


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Reworking those edits in the Female POV version. A Refrain-Type Chorus is the kind that ends each Verse, common in folk Songs, as contrasted with a Stanza-Type Chorus which contains THE Hook summary line that the Verses don’t.

I’m liking the flow of ‘Girl’ instead of ‘Woman’. In the video I see her telling Mr. Take A Hike, “I ain’t no girl, fool. I’m a woman!” and moving on to ask someone else to dance. I’d still stay with ‘Man’ for the male version, rather than ‘Boy’. That video, LOL! She…or He…is getting ready to take the dog out for a walk. She/He slaps on one of those winter hats with the flaps that come down over the ears. Passing the mirror She/He glances in. Glances at the dog, a basset hound, the sad-eyed, droopy-eared type, stops in Her/His tracks, looks in the mirror, looks at the dog, sees the similarity, and the Bridge is singing, ‘Barkin! Barkin’ up the wrong tree!’

I’m thinking the Rhythm of the Background Singers Stanza is the clue to possible music.

Title: “Sexy Girl Card”
Writer: Fran Williams (Lyrical assist, Gary E. Andrews. All Rights Reserved to Fran Williams.)
Copyright Date:1/11/19

(V1)
I got my reality check
one Saturday night!
Before I could say “Hi!”
He said, “Take a hike!”
I’m tryin’ hard, to raise the bar!
(Chorus Refrain)
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(V2)
I’m walking more! Parkin’ my car!
I’m workin’ out, down on the farm
Riding bikes, takin’ that hike!
Eatin’ better, tryin’ to do no harm
Up before dawn, out under the stars!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Bridge)
I’m lookin’ for a man,
At least as sexy as me.
I know I’ve been barkin’,
Barkin’ up the wrong tree!
I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! She’s playin’!
Her Sexy Girl Card!

(V3)
I was workin’ on the fence,
out by the main road,
When I heard his voice,
say, “My car won’t go!”
I saw his face! I saw stars!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Bridge)
I’m lookin’ for a man,
At least as sexy as me.
I know I’ve been barkin’,
Barkin’ up the wrong tree!
I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! She’s playin’!
Her Sexy Girl Card!

I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! He’s sexy!
Her Sexy Girl Card!


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Hi Gary,
This was a wonderful suprise! Thank you so much! Hope we can
develop some awesome music for it..Yeah!! Folks, just picture a
(Toby Keith flavor and style)!! A video could show some dancers
around a very sexy person! Saying (Sexy Man/Girl Card!!!

Thanks,
Fran


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Originally Posted by F Williams
Hi Gary,
This was a wonderful suprise! Thank you so much! Hope we can
develop some awesome music for it..Yeah!! Folks, just picture a
(Toby Keith flavor and style)!! A video could show some dancers
around a very sexy person! Saying (Sexy Man/Girl Card!!!

Thanks,
Fran


Folks, i would love some Country/Pop, or Country/Rock music,
for these lyrics!! It's playful and fun!! Demos will also help to
bring it..

Mild2Wild
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Originally Posted by Gary E. Andrews
Reworking those edits in the Female POV version. A Refrain-Type Chorus is the kind that ends each Verse, common in folk Songs, as contrasted with a Stanza-Type Chorus which contains THE Hook summary line that the Verses don’t.

I’m liking the flow of ‘Girl’ instead of ‘Woman’. In the video I see her telling Mr. Take A Hike, “I ain’t no girl, fool. I’m a woman!” and moving on to ask someone else to dance. I’d still stay with ‘Man’ for the male version, rather than ‘Boy’. That video, LOL! She…or He…is getting ready to take the dog out for a walk. She/He slaps on one of those winter hats with the flaps that come down over the ears. Passing the mirror She/He glances in. Glances at the dog, a basset hound, the sad-eyed, droopy-eared type, stops in Her/His tracks, looks in the mirror, looks at the dog, sees the similarity, and the Bridge is singing, ‘Barkin! Barkin’ up the wrong tree!’

I’m thinking the Rhythm of the Background Singers Stanza is the clue to possible music.

Title: “Sexy Girl Card”
Writer: Fran Williams (Lyrical assist, Gary E. Andrews. All Rights Reserved to Fran Williams.)
Copyright Date:1/11/19

(V1)
I got my reality check
one Saturday night!
Before I could say “Hi!”
He said, “Take a hike!”
I’m tryin’ hard, to raise the bar!
(Chorus Refrain)
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(V2)
I’m walking more! Parkin’ my car!
I’m workin’ out, down on the farm
Riding bikes, takin’ that hike!
Eatin’ better, tryin’ to do no harm
Up before dawn, out under the stars!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Bridge)
I’m lookin’ for a man,
At least as sexy as me.
I know I’ve been barkin’,
Barkin’ up the wrong tree!
I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! She’s playin’!
Her Sexy Girl Card!

(V3)
I was workin’ on the fence,
out by the main road,
When I heard his voice,
say, “My car won’t go!”
I saw his face! I saw stars!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Bridge)
I’m lookin’ for a man,
At least as sexy as me.
I know I’ve been barkin’,
Barkin’ up the wrong tree!
I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! She’s playin’!
Her Sexy Girl Card!

I ain’t tryin’, to be a movie star!
I’m tryin’ to play, my Sexy Girl Card!

(Background singers)
Hey sexy! Be sexy,
Wherever you are!
She’s sexy! He’s sexy!
Her Sexy Girl Card!


Glad to see you here, Fran and Gary.. that's a wonderful lyric and really nice Rhythm . I think Country/Pop will be suitable for it..Hope you find someone to put
some awesome music to it..


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Hi Nelly, thank you so much for the comments!! Gary E. Andrews is a very
talented writer, and took a basic lyric idea and helped develop it to a great
song!! Trying to find a great singer/ musician to demo the song!! Yeah!!

Mild2Wild Child,
Fran Williams


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I just watched some folks line dancing and I think the tempo of this might work with line dancing.


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Originally Posted by Gary E. Andrews
I just watched some folks line dancing and I think the tempo of this might work with line dancing.


Hi Gary, You know a lot more about the, Chords and Rhythms
than I do, however I hoped it could be more, Pop/Rock to fit
In with today's market!! Picture a video with a Sexy Man or
Girl and several dancers being playful and fun!! Oh, by the
way do you still have your,"Sexy Man Card" with 4 Stars for
everything?!!

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The Sexy Man Club said it was in the mail!

Yes, the Song has potential for several ways of doing it. The background singer's section is a versatile Rhythm. A clever musician should be able to explore it several different ways. It's a feel-good 'party' Song, ideal for summer play. And Pop music can always use a positive, up-tempo Song to liven the overall mix of teen-angst and adult distress! LOL So, be sexy, wherever you are!


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Originally Posted by Gary E. Andrews
The Sexy Man Club said it was in the mail!

Yes, the Song has potential for several ways of doing it. The background singer's section is a versatile Rhythm. A clever musician should be able to explore it several different ways. It's a feel-good 'party' Song, ideal for summer play. And Pop music can always use a positive, up-tempo Song to liven the overall mix of teen-angst and adult distress! LOL So, be sexy, wherever you are!


Hi Gary, This comment is awesome! It could be done by a Male or Female!!
It could fit into all music types!! Yeah!!

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Hi Fran/Gary

Excellent write enjoyed the read ,im sure which ever genre you decide with it will be a success

Paul.

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Originally Posted by forbiddencolours129

Hi Fran/Gary

Excellent write enjoyed the read ,im sure which ever genre you decide with it will be a success

Paul.


I Paul, thank you so much for the awesome comments!! Welcome
to Just Plain Folks!!

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Fran Williams



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