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She Let's Her Halo Down
(C) 2019 Geneva Griffin
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I got my ego on one shoulder My angel on the other side And when I let my guard down She messes with my mind
CH I don't always like to hear it When she decides to call me out Every time She let's her halo down
V2 She's no perfect angel She's as human as any girl But that little touch of the devil Sure can make a man's pride hurt
CH I don't always like to feel it When she calls my conscience out Every time She let's her halo down
Bridge In all honesty She's got alotta faith in me And maybe someday I can be The good man she needs
CH I don't always like to see it When she brings my faults out Every time She let's her halo down
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i really like the hook on this,i could write a few with that line.Nice work. Mike
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this is simple and clear, to the point I think, good writing. Lane
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction, one might save you from the other...Vincent
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Thank you mike,
It started out as a love song, then I changed it up. It could go alotta different directions.
Geneva
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