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Title: Up To Something All Rights Reserved: 08/26/2007 Fran Williams
Up To Something
V1) Ever since man loved a woman Ever since woman loved a man Oh yeah..you guessed it..Baby Two Timer, been up to something
V2) Blond hair and cheap perfume You don't need Jack Daniels proof Finding receipts from a hotel room Oh Yeah, you guessed it..Baby..
Chorus) Cheaters from all kinds of society Working class and high and mighty One thing that's always the same It's got a very simple name Oh Yeah..you guessed it.. Just a Cheating, Two Timer Yeah, you guessed right..Baby A Cheating Two Timer
V3) Darling has been sneaking..In They have been sneaking..Out Dont take a world class genius Two Timer, been up to something
Bridge) Ever since a man loved a woman or a woman loved a cheating man
Chorus)2
Tag) You guessed...Baby, Yeah, You figured it all out Been Up To Something, Been Up To Something
This is a funny and playful sophisticated style and flavor!! Needs a Singer/Musician. Will be a 50/50 Co-Write
Mild 2 Wild, Fran Williams
Note:Some Clues to rhyme with Something..
Missing Wedding Ring Leftover night Romancing Pictures of women and Bling..Bling Excuses about....Everything Cell Phone calls and Text Messaging Cell Phone keeps Ringing, Ringing
"Dreamin' Big Dreams", Wake Up And Go For Them
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Aha! So this is what you've been up to! I knew it! Well...I didn't know...but I suspected.
If you use your title to end that Verse I you set a pattern I would expect to repeat in all other Verses, a Refrain-Type Chorus.
I'm running through the alphabet looking for Rhymes for 'Something'. Bumping, bumming, bunting, coming, dumping, dumpling, dumb thing, fronting, grunting, hunting, jumping, lumping, Monday, nothing, one thing, pumping, running, sunning, thumping, wanting.
Each of them suggests ideas in the story, some rated R so you can't use those. But you have to set up that Rhyme if you're going to use it as a Refrain-Type Chorus.
I think you're onto an idea here, as always, that has potential.
Title: Up To Something All Rights Reserved: 08/26/2007 Fran Williams
Up To Something
VI) Ever since A man FIRST loved a woman Ever since A woman WAS UP FOR LOVING THOSE GOOD-LOOKIN' GUYS HAVE HAD ROVING EYES Two-timer'S been, Up To Something!
VII) THEY GO FOR Blonde hair and that cheap perfume YOU CAN SPOT 'EM WHEN THEY FIRST START FRONTING You don't EVEN HAVE TO FIND Jack Daniels proof Two-timer's been, Up To Something!
(BRIDGE) Cheaters from all kinds of society Working class and high and mighty THEY'LL ACCUSE YOU OF CONCLUSION JUMPING. THAT'S HOW YOU KNOW Two-timer'S been, Up To Something!
VIII) SO IF YOUR Darling has been sneaking..In TREATING YOU LIKE HIS LITTLE OL' DUMPLING IT'S A PRETTY GOOD BET HE'S been sneaking..Out Two Timer's been, Up To Something!
(BRIDGE) Cheaters from all kinds of society Working class and high and mighty THEY'LL ACCUSE YOU OF CONCLUSION JUMPING. THAT'S HOW YOU KNOW Two-timer's been, Up To Something!
(Coda) One thing I'VE FOUND'S always BEEN the same THEY CALL IT BY a very simple name Two-timer's been, Up To Something! IT Don't take a world class genius Two Timer'S been, Up To Something ARE THESE receipts from a hotel room? WHO'S THIS MESSAGE FROM, VA VA VOOM! Oh Yeah, you guessed it..Baby.. You guessed IT...Baby, Yeah, You figured it all out Two-timer's been, Up To Something, Two-timer's been, Up To Something MY MOTHER WARNED ME ABOUT YOU.
Last edited by Gary E. Andrews; 04/04/19 08:19 PM.
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Aha! So this is what you've been up to! I knew it! Well...I didn't know...but I suspected.
If you use your title to end that Verse I you set a pattern I would expect to repeat in all other Verses, a Refrain-Type Chorus.
I'm running through the alphabet looking for Rhymes for 'Something'. Bumping, bumming, bunting, coming, dumping, dumpling, dumb thing, fronting, grunting, hunting, jumping, lumping, Monday, nothing, one thing, pumping, running, sunning, thumping, wanting.
Each of them suggests ideas in the story, some rated R so you can't use those. But you have to set up that Rhyme if you're going to use it as a Refrain-Type Chorus.
I think you're onto an idea here, as always, that has potential.
Title: Up To Something All Rights Reserved: 08/26/2007 Fran Williams
Up To Something
VI) Ever since A man FIRST loved a woman Ever since A woman WAS UP FOR LOVING THOSE GOOD-LOOKIN' GUYS HAVE GOT ROVING EYES Two-timer'S been, Up To Something!
VII) THEY GO FOR Blonde hair and that cheap perfume YOU CAN SPOT 'EM WHEN THEY FIRST START FRONTING You don't EVEN HAVE TO FIND Jack Daniels proof Two-timer's been, Up To Something!
(BRIDGE) Cheaters from all kinds of society Working class and high and mighty THEY'LL ACCUSE YOU OF CONCLUSION JUMPING. THAT'S HOW YOU KNOW Two-timer'S been, Up To Something!
VIII) SO IF YOUR Darling has been sneaking..In TREATING YOU LIKE HIS LITTLE OL' DUMPLING IT'S A PRETTY GOOD BET HE'S been sneaking..Out Two Timer's been, Up To Something!
(BRIDGE) Cheaters from all kinds of society Working class and high and mighty THEY'LL ACCUSE YOU OF CONCLUSION JUMPING. THAT'S HOW YOU KNOW Two-timer's been, Up To Something!
(Coda) One thing I'VE FOUND'S always BEEN the same THEY CALL IT BY a very simple name Two-timer's been, Up To Something! IT Don't take a world class genius Two Timer'S been, Up To Something ARE THESE receipts from a hotel room? WHO'S THIS MESSAGE FROM, VA VA VOOM! Oh Yeah, you guessed it..Baby.. You guessed IT...Baby, Yeah, You figured it all out Two-timer's been, Up To Something, Two-timer's been, Up To Something MY MOTHER WARNED ME ABOUT YOU. Hi Gary, I responded yesterday to your suggestions, but it went on my original post!! I love all your advice and always look forward to your help!! You are are very talented, my appreciation is never ending!! Thanks, Fran Williams
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Comments are appreciated!! Fran
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