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#1151445 - 03/08/19 01:51 PM Heaven's Door  
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I have no idea where this came from, but it came almost fully formed out of my head. Sometimes when the Muse takes over, you just gotta let it do its thing.

Heavenís Door

When I doubt and when I stumble
When my words and ideas crumble
And I find myself kneeling on the floor
You will shake your head in wonder
At my poor, pathetic blunders
And open up your arms like Heavenís door

All the light thatís held inside you
All the common sense that guides you
That constant faith that knows what love is for
It will reach into my darkness
Cutting with a laser sharpness
And open up a path to Heavenís door

I sing a loud Hosanna
To your ever-loving manna
The miracles I witness
As you cast my demons out

I will rise and be ignited
In the glory of your brightness
When you open up your arms like Heavenís door

(C)2019 J. Bevington

Last edited by fallendiva; 03/08/19 02:24 PM.
#1151448 - 03/08/19 08:59 PM Re: Heaven's Door [Re: fallendiva]  
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I'll bet there is a tune in your head for this. I hear it my head sung by the Cathedrals with a foot stomping gospel quartet beat, like at quartet competitions we had my home town in southern Illinois.

#1151481 - 03/10/19 12:28 PM Re: Heaven's Door [Re: fallendiva]  
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fallendiva,

Very strong write . . . really well done. Sometimes the best stuff comes to us quickly, and we wonder how and why it came so easily. It's those moments that make all our efforts seem worthwhile, and why we keep at it, I think. Like Perry, I can almost hear the tune that's meant to go with this, which is always a sign of a great lyric. The words just roll. I'll look forward to hearing this one hopefully sometime soon.

All the best,

Deej


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