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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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I would appreciate feedback for this music track for a new song for Justice's new album project. Thanks in advance. Justice - Never Know
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Hi Tom:
I started to listen then wondered if there were lyrics... found them and followed along, pretending I was a young vocalist... and I believe it will work quite well. Thanks for the preview... and best of luck with the album. ----Dave
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Would be hard not to like. Pretty.
I do think that whatever efx are applied to lead guitar are a little excessive. I basically like the sound but it's sounds over-compressed, thinned-out and a little scratchy. I'd pull that back and try to get it fuller, softer, prettier.
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Tom,
It sounds nice to my ear; the lyrics seem a good fit. Would love to hear it all together. But a really nice start. Good luck with it!
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Deej
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Thanks much for the comments. I appreciate it.
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I think this sounds very nice, pretty. The drums sound a little too simple. Would love to hear the melody with the lyrics too. I like the lead guitar but maybe it could be thicker sounding. Nice track! =Bob=
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Thanks Bob ---- I appreciate your comments
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This is really nice , Tom. Can't wait to hear it with the vocal.
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Bob
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Tom,
Great start! Once you get vocals/lyrics you'll re-evaluate instrument settings anyway. Drums need to re-visited IMO, but once you get a vocal vibe going, this can help dictate song's direction for all arrangements. So well done thus far with music--I'm sure there will be a solid melody with nice chord progressions. Nice work!
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Hi Tom, so great to hear Justice is back in the game. Looking forward to hearing this with her sweet voice in the mix.
Ricki
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