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It sucks being me/ but it beats being you Verse Your wife’s gone and left you. You stay drunk all the time. My wife’s just mad at me For eating all the pie. Pre chorus Things could be better Or things could be worse. I’ve had some bad luck But your life’s been cursed. Chorus Yeah it sucks being me But it beats being you. Verse You owe the bank some cash. Your boss just let you go. I’m mad I have to work And can’t go to the show. Pre chorus Things could be better Or things could be worse. I’ve had some bad luck But your life’s been cursed. Chorus Yeah it sucks being me But it beats being you. Bridge It all seems a bit petty When I think about you. The cure to my troubles is A change of attitude. Verse My life could be like yours If I don’t change my ways. You used to be like me But somehow lost your way. Pre chorus Things could be better Or things could be worse. I’ve had some bad luck But your life’s been cursed. Chorus Yeah it sucks being me But it beats being you.
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Ok...I get the message... What genre is this?..I would suggest a light musical approach otherwise it could come across as mean...you want to have your audience on your side, right>
Also use edit button and add space between section for easier reading.
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 01/12/19 02:59 PM.
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It does come across as judgemental and arrogant, it would require softer musical approcah.
But it did give me an idea for a twist.... "it sucks being you but it beats being me"
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