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One I came up with when I wanted to be able to feel the excitement in the air.
IT’S SO GOOD TO SEE YOUR FACE
c2018 Brian Beecher
Step outside the story and what did I see But an old familiar face looking back at me Replaying old dynamics after some three years In the moment couldn’t believe I saw you here
It’s so good to see your face Right here in a special place What’s inside your heart Doesn’t have to be so hard
Accepting all things as they are Talking of things near and far Time to take a moment To think of where we’ve been
When you left you told me it was the perfect time And you were determined that things would be fine And I wasn’t sure if our paths would cross But they did today and a friendship wasn’t lost
It’s so good to see your face Right here in a special place What’s inside your heart Doesn’t have to be so hard
Accepting all things as they are Talking of things near and far Time to take a moment To think of where we’ve been
Last edited by beechnut79; 11/27/18 11:36 AM.
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I might suggest restating your hook at the end of the chorus. Maybe:
Accepting all things as they are Talking of things near and far Reflecting on this time in space It's so good to see your face.
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