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Something I'm sure many of us keep trying to do with various levels of success. Me being one of them.
RE-BALANCE YOUR LIFE
c2018 Brian Beecher
The pressures of work Might steal us away So this afternoon I’ll take some time to play
Working too hard Is against my nature And it’s time to Re-balance my life
This could be the Perfect recipe For making your Dreams reality
Working too hard Is against your nature And it’s time to Re-balance your life
To bring up what’s hidden Into the light Is your heart real happy Do you feel delight
Working too hard Is against your nature And it’s time to Re-balance your life
You will surely feel A stirring in your soul Of love and light Make your mind feel whole
Working too hard Is against your nature And it’s time to Re-balance your life
The pressures of work Might steal us away So this afternoon I’ll take some time to play Working too hard Is against your nature And it’s time to Re-balance your life
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I like the theme and message of the lyrics. The title is ok, but I think it could be a bit more exciting. Instead of 'rebalance your life' maybe..
put some life back in your life
spice up your life
breathe life back into your life
live it up in your life. its your life, live it
only a suggestion to take or leave.
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Thanks for looking at this one and I will look it over soon.
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