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#975489 - 09/06/12 01:48 AM Whispering Chants Of The Deep Blue Sea (lyric or short story)glyn  
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Here's another of my song lyrics that I may make into a short story, so here it is anyway...thanks glyn




Whispering Chants To The Deep Blue Sea

Between the devil and the Deep Blue Sea
This year was the year of the 13th Full Moon
Yep, look outside you'll see
That ole' Blue Moon ...shinning bright

A soft hiss of waves...beckons her..to the water's edge
Again tonight, the sea plays it's tricks..using his voice
Calling out to her, to lure her, out on a ledge
The sea takes over all her control, she has no choice

With an ageless patience
Yet firey passion within her heart
She stands there in a trance
Empty eyes she gazes out over the water
Whispering Chants To The Deep Blue Sea
"Restless Wind and Wild Seas
Return my Commodore safely to me
Please send him home
I need him so despartely...
Over and over....she Whispers Chants ...to the Deep Blue Sea

Her blue negligee' flows in the night see breeze
Bare footsteps stumble lightly.. on the coral rocks
The sea in hopes of claming another soul to it's trophies
Deeper into the water, her heart racing to beat the clock

Tonight being thirty years since he drowned
Swallowed up by the wicked seas
His boat....crew of eight, were never found
The Raging Tide Denies...as the Sea-Gulls Cry

Bridge:
A gray mist on the sea's face, keeps her frozen in this time and place..She remembers their love..heart to heart..in front of God..the words they said as they pledged their love..Together...Always...Forever

With an ageless patience
Yet firey passion within her heart
She stands there in a trance
Empty eyes she gazes out over the water
Whispering Chants To The Deep Blue Sea
"Restless Wind and Wild Seas
Return my Commodore safely to me
Please send him home
I need him so despartely
Over and over..she whispers..Chants...to the Deep Blue Sea

Tag..
The sea's angry for taking her fish..dumping oil and trash..now she's stealin Men's souls...

Tonight she feels too weak to fight, she gives in ...closes her eyes and he's holding her...Tonight they're finally Together..Always..Forever..

Whispering chants All Theses Years...To The Deep
Blue Sea........

written by glyn..



©copyrightallrightsreserved glynda duncan 2010

Last edited by glynda; 09/06/12 01:54 AM.
#975503 - 09/06/12 04:01 AM Re: Whispering Chants Of The Deep Blue Sea (lyric or short story)glyn [Re: glynda]  
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I really really like this Glynda.

I got into the story from the word go, and it carried me along real nice.

You know I love ghostly things, so I may have a go at this one, if thats ok.

Cant promise, but would try real hard


God Bless Roy and Helen


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#975505 - 09/06/12 05:02 AM Re: Whispering Chants Of The Deep Blue Sea (lyric or short story)glyn [Re: Roy Cooper]  
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Hey Roy,

Yea buddy..nothing I'd love more than to have you do this....can't wait to see what you do to it..tks glyn

#975539 - 09/06/12 11:57 AM Re: Whispering Chants Of The Deep Blue Sea (lyric or short story)glyn [Re: glynda]  
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lets see what I can do

God Bless Roy and Helen


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#1136233 - 02/04/18 04:10 AM Re: Whispering Chants Of The Deep Blue Sea (lyric or short story)glyn [Re: glynda]  
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Oh wow forgot about this one...really think it will be a good little....little....well whatever it comes out to be....glyn

#1145219 - 10/07/18 04:53 AM Re: Whispering Chants Of The Deep Blue Sea (lyric or short story)glyn [Re: glynda]  
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You know I don't know why but I love this one...


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