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This song came to me after reading the poem Low Noon by Jim Ralston. It occurred to me that I might be plagiarizing but after hearing the song, I'm happy to say Mr. Ralston doesn't think so and that this simple acknowledgement is enough. Thanks Jim.

Musically, I was looking for something a little retro, like what Smokey or Boyz II Men would want to sing. Thanks Mike Zaneski for nailing it.

https://soundcloud.com/rickib/doing-the-same


DOING THE SAME

It’s been a year since we lingered in a slow dance
Got lost in our dreams or gave us a second chance
Haven’t heard your voice or whispered your name
And somewhere, you’re out there, doing the same

Long after we both knew for sure it was over
We did what desperate couples do to get closer
Now I deny it but know I’m to blame
And somewhere, you’re out there, doing the same

The days roll by too fast
Can’t choose the ones that last
Quiet ones no longer hurt
They bring a different kind of thirst

It hits me hard on a random Wednesday morning
No clouds in the sky, a day that gives no warning
That it’s safe to recall all the love you gave
And somewhere, you’re out there
Doing the same
Doing the same
Somewhere, you’re out there, doing the same

©Ricki E. Bellos (BMI)

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Yup, he nailed it alright! And yes, I could hear Boyz To Men doing this, although I've never heard them sing a lyric anywhere near as good as this one.

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Thanks for checking this out, Gavin. Mike is a wonder.

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Hi Ricki,


Wow.
Nice lyrics, and man............... those vocals are hard to beat.


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Thanks for listening Calvin. Mike really brought it, as he always does.

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Hey Ricki,

This is just superb, and MIke, those vocals are just awesome.

Great work, no nits here.

cheers, niteshift

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Congratulations, Ricki:

It's always good to get permission... and together, you and Mike really created a gem. Enjoyed my listen. ----Dave

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No nits from Niteshift? Whaaat? smile Thanks for listening and glad you liked it.

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Thanks Dave and glad you enjoyed it.

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Hey Ricki,
I really enjoyed this one. The production is absolutely awesome. Those vocal harmonies are so perfect. Mike is amazing.

All the best
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I liked this; that Smokey/Jackson vocal was way cool.
Mike Z is great!To me the background music in the 1V sounded like a '60's 45 being taped. (Perhaps the intent) I think something strong musically between the verses would help. I don't think the BV's are working as well as they might. I think a BIG chorus is needed.
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Hi Ricki
Without reading your introduction of the song it brought back memories of those 60s pop ballads circa 1962.
A nice intro and supurb MZ vocal.
Really enjoyed your new old one.Worked well
Travis


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Very pretty. Lovely lyrics.

Martin

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Thanks Robert, and yes...Mike is amazing!

Ricki

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Thanks for listening and commenting, Mike. Not sure what you're hearing in 1V that isn't throughout the whole song? I wanted a Smokey-like sound and Mike Z did exactly that. I arbitrarily chose to write an AABA song, the refrain/hook after each verse and a bridge, without a chorus, because it seemed more in keeping with the retro feel I was looking for. Glad you liked it.

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Glad it worked for you, Travis, and thanks for listening.

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Thanks for tuning in, Martin and letting us know you liked it.

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Ricki (and Mike),

The lyrics here are stellar—Mike does a brilliant job vocally here (and not taking anything away from him or the arrangement), but sometimes great lyrics make a great melody and vocal easier—I think that may be the case here. Wonderful, full production—pretty on the ear. Liked it from start to finish. Very cool!

Humble regards to you both,

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Great song....I hear Smokey Robinson singing this all the way to #1.
A very nice piece of writing!!
-Tom

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Thanks, Deej.

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That's what I hear too, Tom. Thanks for listening.

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Wow, that's a really nice write and a well produced track!

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,Enjoyed this song. Harmonies are very well put together,.

Regards
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Very nice Rikki,

Mike, you got the Smokie Robinson thing going quite well! This song very unique, kind of 60's vibe yet a more modern approach. This would make a great sound track song for an animated film.

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Thanks Moker. Good to hear from you and hope you stick around.

Ricki

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Thanks Mimmo. Mike knows his way around a tune. Glad you enjoyed.

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Yep, I asked for Smokey and that's just what he gave me. Glad you stopped by for a listen, Steady Eddie.

Ricki


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