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#1144355 - 09/01/18 12:10 AM His Eyes  
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Hi there everyone, it is so good to be back. I have a new recording that I would love to share. It is a bit more theatrical than any of my other tunes......and was inspired for a playwright. All comments are welcome and first impressions are most welcome!!
Thanks so much, and I look forward to listening to all of yours
-Tom

“HIS EYES”
Words & Music by Tom Tognaci

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13776249

How can I so blunder?
There she is in love with him
Instead of loving me
But is it any wonder?
There he stands in all his fineness
Then take a look at me

But I’ll never forget her
Even though she’s over me
The way she looks into his eyes
She’s found what she just couldn’t find in me

~ Instrumental ~

No, I’ll never forget her
And the way she passed me by
The way she looked into my eyes
I never knew she meant it as goodbye

Will there be another?
Well if there is
I’ll know if it’s
His eyes she searches for

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#1144359 - 09/01/18 01:02 AM Re: His Eyes [Re: IronKnee]  
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IronKnee:

Some brilliant guitar work going on here—wish I could play that well; that beautifully. And what an affecting vocal—nuanced, compelling, vulnerable. This is just some great work. Very impressive tune, wonderfully performed. Great stuff—I’ll be listening to it many times again.

My very humble regards,

Deej

#1144373 - 09/01/18 10:14 AM Re: His Eyes [Re: IronKnee]  
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Hi Tom,


Wow, I guess it doesn't matter what YOU do, it's going to come out sounding good, take a bow, good work.


Calvin


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#1144374 - 09/01/18 10:48 AM Re: His Eyes [Re: IronKnee]  
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Sweetly done, Tom:

Perfect vocal for a sad, sweet song. You kept it simple yet the guitar "flourishes" did not overpower while you sang. Best of luck with this. I'm told the "three minute rule" is no longer "in vogue"... and why not! You told the story then opened the door of hope for the listener. Thanks for your "pre-amble" as you introduced the song... and yes, theatrical says it all. I hope you plan to pitch it for licensing. Our John Lawrence Schick might provide some great tips if you need some advice about the ins and outs of licensing.

All the best... I enjoyed this very much. ----Dave

#1144379 - 09/01/18 11:57 AM Re: His Eyes [Re: IronKnee]  
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An unusual approach, Tom and a good theatrical piece.
Now all you have to do is find a play to set it in.

Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

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#1144427 - 09/03/18 01:31 PM Re: His Eyes [Re: Vicarn]  
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Originally Posted by Deej56
IronKnee:

Some brilliant guitar work going on here—wish I could play that well; that beautifully. And what an affecting vocal—nuanced, compelling, vulnerable. This is just some great work. Very impressive tune, wonderfully performed. Great stuff—I’ll be listening to it many times again.

My very humble regards,

Deej

Thanks for the generous comments Deej........it is much appreciated!

Originally Posted by Calvin
Hi Tom,


Wow, I guess it doesn't matter what YOU do, it's going to come out sounding good, take a bow, good work.


Calvin


Maggie Udder..... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

Thanks you as well calvin.......it's always nice to see you. I do appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment! Thanks.


Originally Posted by Dave Rice
Sweetly done, Tom:

Perfect vocal for a sad, sweet song. You kept it simple yet the guitar "flourishes" did not overpower while you sang. Best of luck with this. I'm told the "three minute rule" is no longer "in vogue"... and why not! You told the story then opened the door of hope for the listener. Thanks for your "pre-amble" as you introduced the song... and yes, theatrical says it all. I hope you plan to pitch it for licensing. Our John Lawrence Schick might provide some great tips if you need some advice about the ins and outs of licensing.

All the best... I enjoyed this very much. ----Dave


Thanks Dave.....your comments reassure my aims with this song. And at this point, my dreams of writing to an audience from on top the big stage has waned. I have a great job....and writing for my family and friends are what I look forward to the most!
But, I am always open to making my songs better ;-)
Thanks, again!


Originally Posted by Vicarn
An unusual approach, Tom and a good theatrical piece.
Now all you have to do is find a play to set it in.

Vic


Hi Vic...and thanks for listening and commenting......I'll probably have to write and produce the play if I want this song to be in it.....;-)
Thanks again.....



And thanks to all who have listened

-Tom

#1144429 - 09/03/18 04:24 PM Re: His Eyes [Re: IronKnee]  
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Yes, definitely has that theatrical feel about it. Really good performance.

I'm a bit confused by the "his" in the last line.

I’ll know if it’s
His eyes she searches for

Who is he? The same guy as earlier in the song? A different guy? The singer (which you would expect to be "my," of course)

#1144435 - 09/04/18 12:45 AM Re: His Eyes [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Originally Posted by Gavin Sinclair
Yes, definitely has that theatrical feel about it. Really good performance.

I'm a bit confused by the "his" in the last line.

I’ll know if it’s
His eyes she searches for

Who is he? The same guy as earlier in the song? A different guy? The singer (which you would expect to be "my," of course)


Hi Gavin........thanks for listening and asking!
The hero proclaims that if there ever is another love that interests him, he is now going to know (hind sight, and all) if she is truly interested in himself, or if she is just playing with his heart. Thanks, again!!
-Tom

#1144586 - 09/11/18 04:29 AM Re: His Eyes [Re: IronKnee]  
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This is good Tom great compelling lyric and musically outstanding.
Unusual, off the wall and brilliant
Travis


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#1144796 - 09/18/18 07:14 PM Re: His Eyes [Re: IronKnee]  
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Tom, I always enjoy listening to your songs. It's something a little different from you. It's good to stretch our wings now and then and see what else we can do. Well done.

Ricki

#1144969 - 09/27/18 01:39 AM Re: His Eyes [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
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Originally Posted by Travis david
This is good Tom great compelling lyric and musically outstanding.
Unusual, off the wall and brilliant
Travis

Thanks......I really appreciate the kind words!!

Originally Posted by Ricki E. Bellos
Tom, I always enjoy listening to your songs. It's something a little different from you. It's good to stretch our wings now and then and see what else we can do. Well done.

Ricki


Thanks Ricki........I knew you'd understand ;-)


And thanks to all who have listened!
-Tom

#1145523 - 10/18/18 10:30 PM Re: His Eyes [Re: IronKnee]  
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Well Thomas, I had no idea you could play like that. Very skillful and cleanly played. Please tell me you did thousands of takes.
You express a new side of yourself here. I like it. Understated and brimming with emotion.
So good bro.
Tom


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