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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/04/24 12:47 PM
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This one may be a bit similar to the piece I just reviewed.
IN MY HANDS
c2018 Brian Beecher
Baby in my hands is my love for you With the spirit calm knowing you feel it too Dream journaling, music or anything that Expresses my feelings are yours to be had Baby in my hands is my love for you
The goddess of love enters where she delights in words Language of love in any tongue waiting to be heard We cultivate the ability to see both sides Of every situation with nothing to hide Baby in my hands is my love for you
I hope you welcome the feeling true love can bring We do the things we must to keep things moving On pressure to slow down and evaluate Mind and heart together is so great Baby in my hands is my love for you
Baby in my hands is my love for you With the spirit calm knowing you feel it too Dream journaling, music or anything that Expresses my feelings are yours to be had Baby in my hands is my love for you
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It reads a little awkwardly Brian. Perhaps a trim losing some syllables might make it flow. Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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the first line made me stumble, Baby and hands brings 2 images. The lyric is more poetic than conversational
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