Who's Online Now
21 registered members (Gavin Sinclair, Calvin, couchgrouch, 9ne, beechnut79, Dave Rice, Harriet Ames, Barry David Butler, Everett Adams, chazma2, 3 invisible), and 298 guests, and
Key: Admin, Global Mod, Mod
Shout Box
Member Spotlight
Perry Neal Crawford
Perry Neal Crawford
California
Posts: 56
Joined: November 2016
Show All Member Profiles 
What's Going On
Race to the Bottom
by Gavin Sinclair. 07/19/18 12:40 PM
My Name Is Death
by Calvin. 07/19/18 12:40 PM
I Can't Stand Still
by 9ne. 07/19/18 12:36 PM
Wounds that Time Won't Heal
by beechnut79. 07/19/18 12:04 PM
Rocked to the Bones
by beechnut79. 07/19/18 12:02 PM
top ten songwriters of the last fifty years.
by Ray E. Strode. 07/19/18 12:00 PM
Been on My Mind Too Long
by beechnut79. 07/19/18 11:58 AM
Yes I really do care
by beechnut79. 07/19/18 11:56 AM
Grace, Healing, Wonder and Love
by beechnut79. 07/19/18 11:52 AM
Throw Another Brick On Me
by beechnut79. 07/19/18 11:50 AM
Chatham NYer Just won GRAND PRIZE on OurStage!
by winfilm. 07/19/18 09:07 AM
Turning 60
by Dave Rice. 07/18/18 09:59 PM
Can't Love No-One But Her
by Gavin Sinclair. 07/18/18 07:45 PM
Letters From Alcatraz
by couchgrouch. 07/18/18 07:42 PM
I Remember Autumn
by Douglas Murphy. 07/18/18 07:22 PM
Many Years Ago
by Douglas Murphy. 07/18/18 07:16 PM
How Many Writers Do You Need...AND why
by Martin Lide. 07/18/18 05:24 PM
One More Chance
by Mackie H.. 07/18/18 04:45 PM
new digital single-"Holiday"
by markus-ky. 07/18/18 03:12 PM
Dancing Horses 2
by lane1777. 07/18/18 11:52 AM
Smoke And Mirrors
by Gavin Sinclair. 07/18/18 11:24 AM
Far From My One True Love
by Ricki E. Bellos. 07/18/18 09:08 AM
Hometown Refugee
by Janice & Bud. 07/18/18 07:58 AM
Last Place I Looked
by Michael LeBlanc. 07/17/18 11:40 AM
Five Hundred Miles [Cover]
by RainyDayMan. 07/16/18 10:48 PM
An Innocent Man
by RainyDayMan. 07/16/18 06:18 PM
NEW MEMBERS CHECK HERE
by Liburan_Lombok. 07/16/18 12:32 AM
Interesting post on Witchita Lineman
by Liburan_Lombok. 07/16/18 12:28 AM
SWEET ROSA LEA Mackie Humphries
by Mackie H.. 07/16/18 12:16 AM
Summer
by DMsoundz. 07/15/18 09:45 PM
Top Posters(All Time)
Calvin 19,524
Travis david 10,934
Kevin Emmrich 10,539
Jean Bullock 10,330
Kaley Willow 10,240
Two Singers 9,571
Joice Marie 9,186
Mackie H. 8,835
glynda 8,574
Mike Dunbar 8,574
Tricia Baker 8,318
Colin Ward 7,893
Corey 7,357
couchgrouch 7,327
Dave Rice 6,740
Wyman Lloyd 6,578
Mark Kaufman 6,434
Joe Wrabek 6,402
ben willis 6,092
Lynn Orloff 5,788
Louis 5,725
Vicarn 5,688
Linda Sings 5,604
niteshift 5,390
KimberlyinNC 5,210
Derek Hines 4,893
DonnaMarilyn 4,618
Blake Hill 4,528
Neil Cotton 4,365
Bob Cushing 4,351
Bill Osofsky 4,199
Cindy Miller 4,178
Tom Shea 4,173
TamsNumber4 4,029
Roy Cooper 3,999
nightengale 3,965
Caroline 3,865
Kolstad 3,782
Dan Sullivan 3,710
MFB III 3,687
Dottie 3,427
joewatt 3,411
beechnut79 3,389
Bill Cooper 3,279
John Hoffman 3,199
E Swartz 3,133
Skip Johnson 3,027
Pam Hurley 3,007
Terry G 3,005
PopTodd 2,885
Harriet Ames 2,869
Nigel Quin 2,806
MidniteBob 2,706
Nelson 2,562
Tom Tracy 2,558
Polly Hager 2,526
Jerry Jakala 2,524
Al Alvarez 2,499
Eric Thome 2,448
Hummingbird 2,401
Stan Loh 2,263
Sam Wilson 2,241
Judy Hollier 2,232
Erica Ellis 2,202
Wendy D 2,182
TrumanCoyote 2,096
Marty Helly 2,012
DukeWill 1,984
floyd jane 1,947
Clint Anglin 1,904
cindyrella 1,888
David Wright 1,866
maccharles 1,859
Clairejeanne 1,851
Cindy LaRosa 1,824
Ronald Boyt 1,675
Iggy 1,626
Noel Downs 1,620
Rick Heenan 1,577
Cal 1,574
Jack Swain 1,554
Pete Larsen 1,537
Ann Tygart 1,529
Tom Breshers 1,487
RogerS 1,461
Janice & Bud 1,460
Tom Franz 1,452
Ralph Blight 1,440
Chuck Crowe 1,435
Kenneth Cade 1,429
Rick Norton 1,428
bholt 1,411
Letha Allen 1,406
in2piano 1,404
Stan Simons 1,402
mattbanx 1,384
Jen Shaner 1,373
Charlie Wong 1,347
GocartMoz 1,341
KevinP 1,324
Vondelle 1,316
Tom W. 1,313
Jan Petter 1,301
scottandrew 1,292
DakLander 1,265
Ian Ferrin 1,230
PeteG 1,228
Glen King 1,212
IdeaGuy 1,209
AaronAuthier 1,177
Diane Ewing 1,158
summeoyo 1,085
Gerry 1,084
joro 1,077
BobbyJoe 1,075
S.DEE 1,040
yann 1,037
Tony A 1,016
lane1777 1,015
Martin Lide 1,005
argo 986
peaden 984
Wolvman 960
IronKnee 930
Jak Kelly 912
krtinberg 890
Drifter 886
Petra 883
RJC 845
Brenda152 840
Nadia 827
Juan 797
TKO 784
frahmes 781
teletwang 762
90 dB 745
tbryson 737
Andy K 734
Andy Kemp 733
ant 732
Jackie444 722
3daveyO3 704
Dayson 703
9ne 702
Dixie 701
Joy Boy 695
Knute 686
Lee Arten 678
Deej56 655
Katziis 652
R.T.MOORE 638
quality 637
CG King 622
douglas 621
Mel 614
NaomiSue 601
Pat Hardy 599
Irwin 589
Shandy 589
Ria 587
TAMERA64 583
qbaum 570
nitepiano 565
pRISCILLA 556
Tink2 553
musica 539
Moosesong 530
deanbell 528
RobertK 527
BonzaiWag 523
Roderic 522
BB Wilbur 511
goodfolks 499
Fdemetrio 491
Zeek 487
Stu 486
Steve P. 481
R&M 463
KathyW 462
allenb 459
MaxG 458
Philjo 454
fanito 448
trush48 448
dmk 442
arealrush 437
DGR 436
avweek 435
Stephen D 433
Emmy 431
Rob L 426
marquez 422
kit 419
Softkrome 417
kyrksongs 415
RRon 408
Laura G. 407
VNORTH 407
Debra 407
eb 406
cuebald 399
EdPerrone 399
Dannyk1 395
Hobart 395
Davyboy49 393
Smile 389
GJShades 387
Ezt 384
tone 380
Marla 380
Cecilee 379
iggyiggy 378
coalminer 377
java 374
spidey 371
sweetsong 370
danny 367
Jim Ryan 360
papaG 353
Alek 352
Z - man 350
John K 348
JamesDF5 347
Jaden 344
ddreuter 341
TheBaz 340
Steggy 339
leif 339
tonedeaf 336
rickwork 334
Eddie Ray 332
Johnboy 328
Bob Lever 328
Helicon1 327
lucian 326
Muskie 321
kc 319
Z. Mulls 318
ptondreau 313
ONOFFON 312
Chris B. 310
trush 304
ed323 297
Ellen M 293
lizzorn 291
nicnac49 290
pomeranj 289
Char 286
ktunes 285
markus-ky 280
Register Today!
Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.

By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
Rate This Thread
#1141930 - 06/16/18 09:45 AM Sometimes I Can't Breathe  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Good Morning JPFers! Thought I'd switch gears and post something a little more mainstream. As always, Mike Zaneski has lent his considerable producion skills and artistry to my endeavors. Thanks Mike!

The lyrics, as posted, reflect the change I am contemplating. Let me know if you agree. Any and all other comments are welcome. Thanks for listening.

Ricki

https://soundcloud.com/rickib/sometimes-i-cant-breathe

SOMETIMES I CANíT BREATHE

Sometimes I canít breathe
So I hide inside my head
Till lifeís a pretty dream
Why did love turn mean
Promises made, hearts betrayed
Vows turn to elegies

Thunder rolls like a summer storm
I wake myself and realize
Iím drowning in cloud colored eyes

Sometimes I canít breathe
It hits me like a tidal wave
Surrounds me so I canít be saved
Iím still standing as it recedes
But sometimes I canít breathe

Sometimes I canít breathe
In a less hopeful mood
I step back from this scene
I row and I flow
Down the easy river
The past fades as I go

The sea rises like Neptuneís ghost
Thereís nothing left to protect me
From its moods and mysteries

Sometimes I canít breathe
It hits me like a tidal wave
Surrounds me so I canít be saved
Iím still standing as it recedes
But sometimes I canít breathe

I canít breathe
Sometimes I canít breathe

©Ricki E. Bellos (BMI)

#1141931 - 06/16/18 10:01 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Dec 2008
Posts: 8,725
John Lawrence Schick Offline
Top 20 Poster
John Lawrence Schick  Offline
Top 20 Poster

Joined: Dec 2008
Posts: 8,725
PA
Great concept Ricki! Meaningful lyrics. I like the harmony and vocal. Good work here!

Best, John smile

#1141952 - 06/16/18 01:03 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 6,740
Dave Rice Online content
Top 40 Poster
Dave Rice  Online Content
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 6,740
Texas
Hi Ricki:

I listened about two hours ago and responded with about three pages of praise and exuberance.. but much to my chagrin... not one single sentence made it to this wonderful song-post. I went on about how that sneaky Zaneski had found a way to bring in a Sitar to quietly accompany your pleasing vocal. My he has a way to enhance and surprise us... just like you... with such raw talent and creativity. We are lucky to have JPF for a place to hang our collective hats... and enjoy refreshing new songs. Thanks so much.

#1141953 - 06/16/18 01:14 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 10,934
Travis david Online content
Top 10 Poster
Travis david  Online Content
Top 10 Poster

Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 10,934
Kendal, Cumbria .UK
I too listened a wee bit earlier Ricki.
.MZ's production skills seem infinate.
Great song Ricki really enjoyed the listen.
A sure fire winner!
Travis


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1141954 - 06/16/18 02:22 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Nov 2010
Posts: 5,688
Vicarn Offline
Top 50 Poster
Vicarn  Offline
Top 50 Poster

Joined: Nov 2010
Posts: 5,688
UK
Great lyric that has meaning, Ricki and Mike did a fine job on it.

Just one tiny teeny nit. The phasing in:
"Surrounds me so I can't breathe" sounds a little rushed.

Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.
http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold
#1141958 - 06/16/18 02:53 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Sep 2009
Posts: 8,835
Mackie H. Offline
Top 20 Poster
Mackie H.  Offline
Top 20 Poster

Joined: Sep 2009
Posts: 8,835
NASHVILLE, TN
Ricki

This is another fine song, with great Harmony, taking it to higher level--I like this one a lot!

Mackie

#1141968 - 06/16/18 09:13 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,341
GocartMoz Offline
Top 200 Poster
GocartMoz  Offline
Top 200 Poster

Joined: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,341
Florida
Wow Ricki,

My favorite from you. Fantastic lyric and just a great vocal. Michael did a fantastic job with the production. For me, it had the feel of Sandy Dennyís, Who Knows Where The Time Goes, which is one of my all time faves. Great stuff.

Dave

#1141980 - 06/16/18 11:01 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 655
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 655
Ricki,

Well, thatís a pretty tune, and as usual Mike does a nice job on production. But your vocal and the harmonies really make this resonate on the ear. And lovely lyrics, with nice phrasing throughout. I think this might be my favorite listen from youójust because this hits on all cylinders; every aspect is just so sweet. Well done, Ricki!

My humble regards,

Deej

#1141996 - 06/17/18 05:20 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,524
Calvin Online content
Top 10 Poster
Calvin  Online Content
Top 10 Poster

Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,524
Okeechobee, Florida U.S.A.
Hi Ricki,


Wow---liked it all, but the dreamy vocal is extra cool.


Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

#1142032 - 06/18/18 09:49 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: John Lawrence Schick]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks for listening, John.

Ricki

#1142033 - 06/18/18 09:51 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Travis david]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Dave, I don't know if I can handle 3 pages of praise and exuberance! smile Thank you!

Ricki

#1142045 - 06/18/18 04:25 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,947
floyd jane Offline
Top 200 Poster
floyd jane  Offline
Top 200 Poster

Joined: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,947
Tampa
This is really nice, Ricki. A cool write.

I like the idea of the lyric swap (above) - getting the big reasons up front and then "rowing and flowing" later in the song.

Mike's production is good - as always.

fj

#1142069 - 06/19/18 09:16 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Travis david]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks for checking it out, Travis.

Rick

#1142070 - 06/19/18 09:19 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Vicarn]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
I think you mean "surrounds me so I can't be saved"? Yeah, you're right. smile

Glad you liked it.

Ricki

#1142078 - 06/19/18 05:21 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,460
Janice & Bud Offline
Top 200 Poster
Janice & Bud  Offline
Top 200 Poster

Joined: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,460
Georgia, USA
The backing tracks and the BGV's really work together to support the melody and lyric...great imagery!

It has just of enough ethereal sound with your vocal to emphasize the whole vibe.

Really well done.

J&B


Never grow up...it's a trap!
All our songs feature BiaB
J&B YouTube Sampler
J&B SoundCloud Page
J&B Website
#1142091 - 06/20/18 09:08 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Mackie H.]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks, Mackie, I'm always striving for a higher lever. smile

Ricki

#1142092 - 06/20/18 09:12 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: GocartMoz]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Wow, Dave, mine too! smile Mike has never steered me wrong. Thanks for listening.

Ricki

#1142133 - 06/21/18 02:05 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
And my humble thanks to you, Deej.

Ricki

#1142134 - 06/21/18 02:05 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Calvin]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks for listening, Calvin.

Ricki

#1142135 - 06/21/18 02:07 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: floyd jane]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks for listening and paying attention, Floyd. smile

Ricki

#1142136 - 06/21/18 02:08 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Janice & Bud]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks for listening and commenting, J&B. Glad you liked it.

Ricki

#1142165 - 06/22/18 01:32 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Jun 2018
Posts: 50
mikegouthro Online content
Serious Contributor
mikegouthro  Online Content
Serious Contributor

Joined: Jun 2018
Posts: 50
Ricki

That is another lovely song. The lyrics are in counterpoint to the languid arrangement. I like your voice a lot - it reminds me of Judy Sill - a 1970s performer who departed early.

#1142338 - 06/28/18 08:04 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: mikegouthro]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Hello again, Mike. Thank you for the possitive comments and thanks for the comparison. It was only recently that I heard about her and am honored by it.

Ricki

#1142350 - 06/29/18 05:37 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Dec 2006
Posts: 5,390
niteshift Online content
Top 50 Poster
niteshift  Online Content
Top 50 Poster

Joined: Dec 2006
Posts: 5,390
Sydney, Australia
Hey Ricki,

That's a very meditative song. Very mellow listen. And paradoxically, the breathy vocal just lends to the overall feel.

Took me away ...

cheers, niteshift

#1142371 - 06/29/18 02:12 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: niteshift]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks for listening, Nite. I hope it didn't take you too far away... smile

Ricki

#1142373 - 06/29/18 02:31 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: May 2013
Posts: 912
L. James Tanner Offline
Top 500 Poster
L. James Tanner  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: May 2013
Posts: 912
Indiana
Wow!..I love this tune! Awesome everything, production too!

#1142416 - 07/01/18 05:25 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: L. James Tanner]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Wow! Thanks for listening, James, and the enthusiasm!

Ricki

#1142420 - 07/02/18 01:06 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Feb 2017
Posts: 117
RainyDayMan Offline
Serious Contributor
RainyDayMan  Offline
Serious Contributor

Joined: Feb 2017
Posts: 117
Stratford, Australia
Beautiful! And I loved the harmonies. Have you changed the lyric since posting? The latter half of v1 doesn't match the recording.

#1142447 - 07/02/18 01:56 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: RainyDayMan]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks Owen, glad you enjoyed it. Did you happen to read my first post?

RIcki

#1142449 - 07/02/18 02:12 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 265
Gavin Sinclair Online content
Top 500 Poster
Gavin Sinclair  Online Content
Top 500 Poster

Joined: May 2017
Posts: 265
Conover, North Carolina, USA
Just lovely. Your gentle vocal fits so well with the tune and the dreamy nature of the lyrics. Personally, I wouldn't swap the lyrics, but keep them as they are. The "Down the easy river" line may be metaphorical, but it paints a strong visual picture. For the rest of the song I was in a boat on that river with you singing to me. Also the references to drowning and even the tidal wave somehow feel more meaningful then.

Just my opinion. Either way, it's absolutely wonderful.

Last edited by Gavin Sinclair; 07/02/18 02:12 PM.
#1142554 - 07/05/18 12:24 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks for listening, Gavin, and your comments. I thought the same thing until it was pointed out to me that I don't say what the problem is, why I can't breathe, until way later in the song. If I change it, eveyone will know from the start. It won't take much for the change and then I'll have it both ways...win-win! smile

Ricki

#1142679 - 07/09/18 08:42 PM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
Joined: Jan 2009
Posts: 6,185
Douglas Murphy Offline
Top 40 Poster
Douglas Murphy  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Jan 2009
Posts: 6,185
Montreal, Quebec, Canada
WOW!! Great song, Enjoyed the whole trip. smile

Douglas


"Is this a practice? They are all practices." John Denver

www.soundclick.com/dougmurphy

Skype Contact: douglas.murphy8
#1142745 - 07/11/18 09:45 AM Re: Sometimes I Can't Breathe [Re: Douglas Murphy]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Ricki E. Bellos Offline
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,682
Wisconsin
Thanks for tuning in, Douglas.

Ricki


Support Just Plain Folks

We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.


Membership
Join Just Plain Folks
to receive the free
JPNotes Newsletter!
*this is separate from
message board registration*

Newest Members
winfilm, Liburan_Lombok, azmaster, Johnevans, aliciahess
21057 Registered Users
Forum Statistics
Forums116
Topics118,153
Posts1,113,366
Members21,057
Average Posts Daily30
Most Online1,506
Mar 16th, 2017
Just Plain Quotes
"Sharing in your success is the payback to those who shared in your failure." -Brian Austin Whitney
Today's Birthdays
ViCindy (60), vlado (43)
Popular Topics(Views)
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.6.0