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If you "NEVER" give up on finding happiness in life, it "WILL" find you. http://frettie.com/track_detail/2051
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Morning, Marvin:
I attempted to use the link and "Frettie" appeared. When I clicked-on the "Begin" symbol in the middle of the photo... it immediately reverted back to the "Begin" Symbol. Thought you should know. Probably a simple typo correction... but you never know. My SYM Page has been "frozen in time" for more than a month because the management of that "free website" can't be bothered to fix their problem. Now I can't post new songs on a regular basis like I did for years with them. Drat!
I'll check in again soon to see if your problem was resolved. Looks like an interesting listen. ----Dave
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Back again, Marvin:
I got out of JPF, went to my non-Gargoyle search-engine and went directly to the Frettie site. Two of your songs were displayed on their front page of artists. "Seventeen" worked perfectly but I encountered the same problem with "Love's Gonna Get Us All." So, the problem is probably not something you caused by typing the link. I suspect you will have to discuss the problem with the site's Tech People.
Cotton picking Internet! Can't live without it but can't keep it humming along perfectly, either.
Good luck, Pal. You are one of the best writers here, IMHO! ----Dave
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Hello Marvin. This is beautiful and another example of the talented writers, singers, and producers out there and here on JPF. Truly enjoyed it and agree whole heartedly with the message.
Douglas
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Hi Marvin This is a beauty! A great song and deserves to be heard. Excellent vocal and perhaps the best i've heard on the forum in weeks Regards Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Awesome hook, Marvin. Well done.
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Marvin
That's a wonderful song. The lyric and the melody/chords are top notch and a perfect match to each other. And to boot, the arrangement is rich and well performed - great job. Your song in its present form should be heard by lots of people.
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Hi Marvin...this is a great recording with a fantastic vocal, memorable tune and solid production. The only thing I might say is that if you plan on pitching it, the lyric might need a little more teeth. I'm absolutely no expert and was recently horrified at how bad the lyric to Sweet Little Something was. But if you're an unknown, they expect more. Unfair but true.
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Thanks everyone for listening and commenting. I appreciate each and every one of you, and value your opinions!
Best, Marvin
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No need to parse out this song.
We enjoyed absolutely everything about it!
Well done...
J&B
Check out our new album Janice Merritt "Am I Blue Enough?" on Spotify, Apple Music, Pandora, Amazon and others.
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Thanks J&B for listening and commenting!
Marvin
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