Who's Online Now
25 registered members (couchgrouch, 9ne, Dave Rice, Bob_Dietrich, Gavin Sinclair, Harriet Ames, fallendiva, Fdemetrio, Everett Adams, 5 invisible), and 252 guests, and
Key: Admin, Global Mod, Mod
Shout Box
Member Spotlight
Kolstad
Kolstad
Denmark
Posts: 3,783
Joined: December 2008
Show All Member Profiles 
What's Going On
How many of you wrote number 1 songs
by Moosesong. 09/21/18 08:55 PM
Doing The Same
by Ricki E. Bellos. 09/21/18 08:51 PM
Show me with Laura Kelsey
by Ricki E. Bellos. 09/21/18 08:45 PM
Mr Sensible
by Gavin Sinclair. 09/21/18 05:52 PM
Underground Railroad Medley
by couchgrouch. 09/21/18 05:09 PM
Box of Frogs
by Perry Neal Crawford. 09/21/18 03:23 PM
Is there Pro Music Industry people on this website
by Marc Barnette. 09/21/18 01:44 PM
Grandpa stood up for Jesus
by niteshift. 09/21/18 02:20 AM
Devotion
by niteshift. 09/21/18 01:50 AM
HELP ME PLEASE!!!
by Brian Austin Whitney. 09/20/18 02:49 PM
NEW MEMBERS CHECK HERE
by Brian Austin Whitney. 09/20/18 12:22 PM
You lying about my brother
by Spanky9. 09/20/18 07:34 AM
Son in Nashville...
by John Lawrence Schick. 09/20/18 05:56 AM
John Rich/ Kaepernick
by Fdemetrio. 09/19/18 05:04 PM
In France
by Gavin Sinclair. 09/19/18 01:25 PM
MY GPS IS SET FOR HEAVEN
by F Williams. 09/19/18 09:59 AM
Go Go Boy
by Calvin. 09/19/18 09:54 AM
Too Good To Be Forgot
by Marvin Adcock. 09/19/18 05:58 AM
Love Goes
by Ricki E. Bellos. 09/18/18 08:52 PM
ISLAND OF EVERFREE( With seasonal outro)
by Ricki E. Bellos. 09/18/18 08:40 PM
ORDINARY MAN (feat. Donovan Plant)
by Ricki E. Bellos. 09/18/18 08:32 PM
His Eyes
by Ricki E. Bellos. 09/18/18 08:14 PM
How do I get recording company to. Read my songs
by Marc Barnette. 09/18/18 06:56 PM
How do I get people to be interested in me
by Marc Barnette. 09/18/18 06:53 PM
A Parable...
by couchgrouch. 09/18/18 06:48 PM
'' Life''
by Dennis Wright. 09/18/18 03:38 PM
Anybody else getting soliticitations from Ms Sue?
by Everett Adams. 09/18/18 08:25 AM
Good Luck Eddie
by Gavin Sinclair. 09/17/18 01:56 PM
You can win
by Spanky9. 09/17/18 12:07 PM
Old Letters
by Vicarn. 09/17/18 10:20 AM
Top Posters(All Time)
Calvin 19,599
Travis david 11,015
Kevin Emmrich 10,540
Jean Bullock 10,330
Kaley Willow 10,240
Two Singers 9,571
Joice Marie 9,186
Mackie H. 8,839
glynda 8,574
Mike Dunbar 8,574
Tricia Baker 8,318
Colin Ward 7,899
couchgrouch 7,374
Corey 7,357
Dave Rice 6,800
Wyman Lloyd 6,578
Mark Kaufman 6,436
Joe Wrabek 6,403
ben willis 6,094
Vicarn 5,791
Lynn Orloff 5,788
Louis 5,725
Linda Sings 5,604
niteshift 5,435
KimberlyinNC 5,210
Derek Hines 4,893
DonnaMarilyn 4,622
Blake Hill 4,528
Neil Cotton 4,371
Bob Cushing 4,351
Bill Osofsky 4,199
Cindy Miller 4,178
Tom Shea 4,173
TamsNumber4 4,032
Roy Cooper 4,005
nightengale 3,965
Caroline 3,865
Kolstad 3,783
Dan Sullivan 3,710
MFB III 3,687
Dottie 3,427
joewatt 3,411
beechnut79 3,411
Bill Cooper 3,279
John Hoffman 3,199
E Swartz 3,148
Skip Johnson 3,027
Pam Hurley 3,007
Terry G 3,005
PopTodd 2,887
Harriet Ames 2,870
Nigel Quin 2,808
MidniteBob 2,707
Nelson 2,570
Tom Tracy 2,558
Polly Hager 2,526
Jerry Jakala 2,524
Al Alvarez 2,499
Eric Thome 2,448
Hummingbird 2,401
Stan Loh 2,263
Sam Wilson 2,241
Judy Hollier 2,232
Erica Ellis 2,202
Wendy D 2,184
TrumanCoyote 2,096
Marty Helly 2,012
DukeWill 1,984
floyd jane 1,980
Clint Anglin 1,904
cindyrella 1,888
maccharles 1,876
David Wright 1,866
Clairejeanne 1,851
Cindy LaRosa 1,824
Ronald Boyt 1,675
Iggy 1,629
Noel Downs 1,620
Rick Heenan 1,580
Cal 1,574
Jack Swain 1,554
Pete Larsen 1,537
Ann Tygart 1,529
Bud 1,519
Tom Breshers 1,487
RogerS 1,461
Tom Franz 1,452
Ralph Blight 1,440
Chuck Crowe 1,435
Kenneth Cade 1,429
Rick Norton 1,428
bholt 1,411
Letha Allen 1,406
in2piano 1,404
Stan Simons 1,402
GocartMoz 1,387
mattbanx 1,384
Jen Shaner 1,373
Charlie Wong 1,347
KevinP 1,324
Vondelle 1,316
Tom W. 1,313
Jan Petter 1,301
scottandrew 1,292
DakLander 1,265
Ian Ferrin 1,230
PeteG 1,228
Glen King 1,212
IdeaGuy 1,209
AaronAuthier 1,177
Diane Ewing 1,158
Martin Lide 1,106
Gerry 1,089
summeoyo 1,085
joro 1,081
BobbyJoe 1,075
S.DEE 1,040
yann 1,037
Tony A 1,016
lane1777 1,015
argo 986
peaden 984
Wolvman 960
IronKnee 937
Jak Kelly 912
krtinberg 890
Drifter 886
Petra 883
RJC 845
Brenda152 840
Nadia 827
Juan 797
TKO 784
frahmes 781
teletwang 762
90 dB 745
9ne 744
Andy K 739
tbryson 737
Deej56 733
Andy Kemp 733
ant 732
Jackie444 731
3daveyO3 704
Dayson 703
Dixie 701
Joy Boy 695
Knute 686
Lee Arten 678
Katziis 652
R.T.MOORE 638
quality 637
CG King 622
douglas 621
Mel 614
Fdemetrio 604
NaomiSue 601
Pat Hardy 599
Irwin 589
Shandy 589
Ria 587
TAMERA64 583
qbaum 570
nitepiano 565
pRISCILLA 556
Tink2 553
Moosesong 541
musica 539
deanbell 528
RobertK 527
BonzaiWag 523
Roderic 522
BB Wilbur 511
goodfolks 499
Zeek 487
Stu 486
Steve P. 481
R&M 469
KathyW 462
allenb 459
MaxG 458
Philjo 454
fanito 448
trush48 448
dmk 442
arealrush 437
DGR 436
avweek 435
Stephen D 433
Emmy 431
Rob L 426
marquez 422
kit 419
Softkrome 417
kyrksongs 415
RRon 408
Laura G. 407
VNORTH 407
Debra 407
eb 406
cuebald 399
EdPerrone 399
Dannyk1 395
Hobart 395
Davyboy49 393
Smile 389
GJShades 387
Ezt 384
tone 380
Marla 380
Cecilee 379
iggyiggy 378
coalminer 377
java 374
spidey 371
sweetsong 370
danny 367
Jim Ryan 360
Alek 356
papaG 353
Z - man 350
John K 348
JamesDF5 347
Jaden 344
ddreuter 341
TheBaz 340
Steggy 339
leif 339
tonedeaf 336
rickwork 334
Eddie Ray 332
Johnboy 328
Bob Lever 328
Helicon1 327
lucian 326
Muskie 321
kc 319
Z. Mulls 318
ptondreau 313
ONOFFON 312
Chris B. 310
trush 304
ed323 297
Ellen M 293
lizzorn 291
nicnac49 290
pomeranj 289
Char 286
ktunes 285
markus-ky 284
Register Today!
Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.

By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
Rate This Thread
#1140826 - 05/17/18 12:34 AM Sweet Lorelei  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
HI, all:

Hereís my latest venture. Mostly, it's an experiment for me in playing with and recording vocals and harmonies. Iíve really only tried recording harmonies on one song before. This one seemed ripe for some vocal layers, and so here's where I've gone with it. The not so great lead guitar and riffs throughout is me--hopefully it's enough to be additive and give a feel for what I'd like this one to sound like. It's also a second dive into BIAB (this time using markers!). In sum, this one's more me just trying to make things sound better than just a g/v, so any assistance furthering my education, as always, will be much appreciated.

Thanks in advance to you all!

Deej

Sweet Lorelei

Thereís that rise,
just past the mill,
meet me at midnightó
seems like years since
I held you in my arms.
We could kiss under the moonlight,
beneath a thousand million stars.

Donít leave me forsaken,
(just like youíve done before).
Canít you hear my heart aching
(it makes me want you more).
Donít you know Iíll be right here waiting.

My sweet Lorelei
(donít you want to go).
Sweet Lorelei
(he wonít ever know).
Between you and I,
if we could run away,
I just know that you would say, ďOkayĒ.

All this time
seems like weíre wasting
all of our good years.
Lord, how the days of fancy fly.
Go grab your things
and letís get out of here.
We wonít even say goodbye.

Donít worry me minding
(if you can get away).
Weíll write it off to bad timing
(and plan another day).
Just say the word and
you know Iím all in.

My sweet Lorelei
(donít you want to go).
Sweet Lorelei
(he wonít ever know).
Between you and I,
if we could run away,
Iím sure that you would say, ďOkayĒ.

Donít leave me forsaken,
(just like youíve before).
Donít leave my heart aching
(and bleeding on the floor).
Donít you know that
Iím still here waiting.

My sweet Lorelei
(donít you want to go).
Sweet Lorelei
(he wonít ever know).
Between you and I,
if we could run away,
I wonder if youíd say, ďOkayĒ.

(c)2018 DJ Lekich

Last edited by Deej56; 05/17/18 10:50 PM.
#1140835 - 05/17/18 10:08 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 589
Irwin Offline
Top 500 Poster
Irwin  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 589
Georgetown,Guyana,South Americ...
This sounds good to me.I could not hear anything that is wrong. I enjoy everything, your vocal,the way you played the guitar,the arrangement and the lyric it is well written. I was entertained.

#1140844 - 05/17/18 04:51 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 11,015
Travis david Offline
Top 10 Poster
Travis david  Offline
Top 10 Poster

Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 11,015
Kendal, Cumbria .UK
Hi Deej
I leave the technical issue to others but a good song is a good song no matter what.
You have a good and unique voice. I particularly liked the guitar on this however.
Good story well written and it deserves plenty of plays around here
Regards
Travis


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1140850 - 05/17/18 10:56 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Irwin]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Irwin,

Thanks so much for stopping in and giving this one a listen. Appreciate the kind comments and support.

All the best to you,

Deej

#1140852 - 05/17/18 11:04 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Travis david]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Travis,

Appreciate the feedback. As I was listening to this today a couple more times, there were a couple of areas that seemed in need of correcting, so I tweaked the mix just a bit and reposted to SoundCloud. I'm hopeful I've addressed those to my temporary satisfaction (though I'm sure I'll rethink the mix when I hear it next). I hope I haven't diminished what you liked about the guitar work.

Odd thing is, I listen to this on all different mediums--from headphones, to Sonos, to laptop, to car--and it all sounds subtly different from one to the other. It can drive one bonkers. For now, I'm hoping I've got it in a place I can live with.

Thanks again for the supportive comments. It means a lot.

Kindest regards,

Deej

#1140858 - 05/18/18 10:04 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Jul 2011
Posts: 937
IronKnee Offline
Top 500 Poster
IronKnee  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Jul 2011
Posts: 937
Hawaii
Hi Deej,
A very good performance of a great song. So much to appreciate, here. The melodic hook in the chorus reminds me of, "My Maria". Strong ear worm, here......kudos. Love the vocal work!
Nice lyrics, to-boot...ÖÖÖ.
Good stuff, man!
-Tom

Last edited by IronKnee; 05/18/18 10:05 AM.
#1140860 - 05/18/18 10:13 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 11,015
Travis david Offline
Top 10 Poster
Travis david  Offline
Top 10 Poster

Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 11,015
Kendal, Cumbria .UK
Still sounds good to my ears!
Travis


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1140882 - 05/18/18 11:17 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 3,148
E Swartz Offline
Top 100 Poster
E Swartz  Offline
Top 100 Poster

Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 3,148
Ohio
Hey Deej!

What a great sound you have, very unique. It sounds like a pop song from the mid-late 60's vibe for me. Remember the song "Smile a little smile for me, Rose Marie?" It just has a vibe that is captivating, along with your vocal style.

I do think you might utilize more build with the back ground vocals by not using them in the 2nd & 3rd vs's and let the choruses have those signature tags. Then let the 4thand final vs include the tags along with final chorus. Also tighten up a bit on some of those tags timing--they need to hit right on the beats--harmonies can be off beat a smidgen which sometimes sounds even better and more real, but background tags need to be right in the pocket on beat--they are NOT bad, but a couple may need to be nudged slightly. My point is this, you have a strong melody and a great vocal going on--let the listener fall in love with your "uninterupted" lead vocal before giving them "too much" to think about vocally. By drawing them in more gradually, you'll "build" that arrangement, and IMO, then your song will have a better climactic feel. This is just a suggestion for perhaps you to experiment with I'm certainly not giving you "nits," contrarily I'm digging what you are doing and I think you can showcase it better by not utilizing the background vocals as much--don't show them the "icing on the cake" so early..........

I really enjoyed this unique song, well written, well performed--arrangement could be enhanced IMO by utilizing more build--but remember.......there is no one way to produce any song, and my sugs are just one perception--Use or lose!

steady-eddie


#1140886 - 05/19/18 04:31 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,599
Calvin Offline
Top 10 Poster
Calvin  Offline
Top 10 Poster

Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,599
Okeechobee, Florida U.S.A.
Hello Deej,


You have an entertaining and enjoyable sound.


Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

#1140890 - 05/19/18 09:14 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Aug 2001
Posts: 220
the_lyricwriter Offline
Serious Contributor
the_lyricwriter  Offline
Serious Contributor

Joined: Aug 2001
Posts: 220
Charleston WV USA
I enjoyed the listen thanks for the post

Hard to Say goodbye is Greatness

Anthony

Last edited by the_lyricwriter; 05/19/18 09:17 AM.
#1140907 - 05/19/18 11:09 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Apr 2009
Posts: 3,411
beechnut79 Offline
Top 100 Poster
beechnut79  Offline
Top 100 Poster

Joined: Apr 2009
Posts: 3,411
Villa Park IL
One can expect emotions to be all over the place listening to this song. You have brought the greatest respect to the name Lorelei since the Styx classic in the 1970s.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=srEP-vvhTvY

#1140919 - 05/19/18 09:52 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: IronKnee]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Tom,

Thanks for the listen and kind feedback. I'm not familiar with "My Maria"--I don't think--so I'll have to check that out. Glad that you enjoyed the listen.

All the best,

Deej

#1140920 - 05/19/18 09:53 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Travis david]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Travis,

That's good to know. Every time I listen to it I hear something else that needs work--time to step away from this one for a while, me thinks. But glad it's still sounding OK. Thanks.

Deej

#1140921 - 05/19/18 09:59 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: E Swartz]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Eddie,

Thanks so much for the great feedback. I totally get what your saying about building up the vocals over the course of the song, and I could easily dial back the supporting lead vocals on those first two verses. When I get the energy to turn back to this, I'm going to play with that and see how it sounds. And great tip regarding the tags from a production standpoint. Those are all things I need to learn, so I love hearing it.

Oh, and I guess I'm 0 for 2 on this thread so far, because I'm not sure I'm familiar with "Smile a Little Smile for Me, Marie" either. Something else I'll have to listen to.

All the best,

Deej

#1140922 - 05/19/18 09:59 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Calvin]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Calvin,

I appreciate your stopping in and giving this one a listen. Thanks much.

Best regards,

Deej

#1140923 - 05/19/18 10:01 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: the_lyricwriter]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Lyricwriter,

Thanks for the listen--glad you enjoyed it. And thanks as well for the kind comment regarding "Won't Be Hard to Say Goodbye"--it's much appreciated.

Kind regards,

Deej

#1140924 - 05/19/18 10:04 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: beechnut79]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Beechnut,

Well, there's finally a song reference I know. I had totally forgotten about that old Styxx song. Styxx, by the way, was the first concert I ever went to in my teen years--I think as part of the "Cornerstone" tour. A very popular (at the time) Long Island, NY band called "The Good Rats" opened for them. It was a killer show.

All the best,

Deej

#1140942 - 05/21/18 08:59 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 6,800
Dave Rice Online content
Top 30 Poster
Dave Rice  Online Content
Top 30 Poster

Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 6,800
Texas
Sorry I'm late... again, Deej:

When you "experiment" I suspect you had a good idea of exactly where this song is headed! Great work with BIAB and I really like the vibe you have created. Best of luck with "Sweet Lorelei!" ----Dave

#1140972 - 05/22/18 08:41 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,755
Ricki E. Bellos Online content
Top 40 Poster
Ricki E. Bellos  Online Content
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 6,755
Wisconsin
I like this one, Deej. Great vocals and I like that acoustic guitar but the overall effect is really super. Nice.

Ricki

#1140977 - 05/23/18 03:23 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Dave and Ricki, appreciate the kind comments and feedback.

Dave, I had an idea of what I wanted to do with the harmonies, and surprisingly it was easier to lay down the different tracks than I anticipated, but I do think to Eddie's comments above that I overdid it. I think peeling back and then adding back in, might be may next approach to tweaking the mix on this one.

Thanks to you both for the listen.

Deej

#1140985 - 05/23/18 05:04 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 43
Noel96 Offline
Serious Contributor
Noel96  Offline
Serious Contributor

Joined: May 2018
Posts: 43
DJ,

You've got a great sound happening! You certainly know your way around writing and performing a song!

I'm enjoying everything I'm hearing.

All the best,
Noel

#1141478 - 06/06/18 12:24 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Noel,

Thanks much for the kind comments. I'm trying to do my best while learning along the way. Your support means a lot.

My utmost regards,

Deej

#1141753 - 06/12/18 11:44 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,980
floyd jane Offline
Top 200 Poster
floyd jane  Offline
Top 200 Poster

Joined: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,980
Tampa
Deej,

A sweet song. Nice vocals and harmonies.

Enjoyed.

fj

#1141814 - 06/13/18 10:58 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,387
GocartMoz Offline
Top 200 Poster
GocartMoz  Offline
Top 200 Poster

Joined: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,387
Florida
Hey DeeJ,

I really love your vocal. It reminds me of someone I just can't place. I think it sounds great. It kind of reminds me of some old Ronnie Lane stuff and more current Stuff from The Jayhawks (not really current but 90's instead of 70's. Now that I think of it it is very Jayhawks. Very Americana. Listen to some of their stuff if you haven't. I really enjoyed the tune very much. If I had to search for a nit maybe some minor timing issues and the harmonies could be a bit tighter, but I loved the layering of the vocals. Really nice.

Dave

#1141972 - 06/16/18 10:55 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Thank you Floyd and Dave for stopping in, giving this one a listen, and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.

Dave, I have listened to the Jayhawks--and while I'm generally not a huge fan, "Blue" would easily make my top ten songs list. I love great harmonies, and that song is everything I love about a tune. I appreciate your nod in that direction. Eddie also commented on the timing issues on the harmonies to "Sweet Lorelei". I'll confess they are all pretty much a first take, as I didn't do much editing. Which is to say, they need some weeding and refining.

Thanks for the support and feedback--both of you.

All the best,

Deej

#1142261 - 06/25/18 11:26 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,519
Bud Offline
Top 200 Poster
Bud  Offline
Top 200 Poster

Joined: Feb 2013
Posts: 1,519
Southeastern USA
Very late to the party...but NICE!

We are always engaged when we hear a heartfelt vocal....like this!

Nice harmony and arrangement.

Enjoyed it!

#1142271 - 06/25/18 10:20 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Thanks for the listen, Janice & Bud--glad you enjoyed it!

All the best,

Deej

#1142681 - 07/09/18 08:49 PM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Jan 2009
Posts: 6,196
Douglas Murphy Offline
Top 40 Poster
Douglas Murphy  Offline
Top 40 Poster

Joined: Jan 2009
Posts: 6,196
Montreal, Quebec, Canada
Everything works as far as I am concerned. Keep at it Deej.

Douglas


"Is this a practice? They are all practices." John Denver

www.soundclick.com/dougmurphy

Skype Contact: douglas.murphy8
#1143093 - 07/24/18 12:21 AM Re: Sweet Lorelei [Re: Deej56]  
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Deej56 Offline
Top 500 Poster
Deej56  Offline
Top 500 Poster

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 733
Thanks, Douglas. This one needs some cleaning up, but glad you liked it as is. Appreciate the listen and support.

All the best,

Deej


Support Just Plain Folks

We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.


Membership
Join Just Plain Folks
to receive the free
JPNotes Newsletter!
*this is separate from
message board registration*

Newest Members
Mrs_Sue_Saunders, Spanky9, Hicham, olivergonegreen, RobertBolster
21094 Registered Users
Forum Statistics
Forums116
Topics118,305
Posts1,115,220
Members21,094
Average Posts Daily26
Most Online1,506
Mar 16th, 2017
Just Plain Quotes
"Often, when performing live, entertaining well is better than playing well" -Brian Austin Whitney
Today's Birthdays
No Birthdays
Popular Topics(Views)
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.6.0