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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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Latest from me. I'm not sure what genre this comes under. Every time I choose a genre, somebody says different. Pop ballad, maybe? Comments welcome. Vic https://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold/show-mehttps://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13746782SHOW ME © 2018 Vic Arnold V1 Love's the finest of dimensions It's a feeling you can't see with the purest of intentions More than ecstasy The bone of contention The road to redemption Ch. So show me ... with your heart Lead me ... to your arms Tell me ... with your lips Let the love begin V2 Never boring or conforming Sets no life time for the shelf Lands upon you without warning Picks the moment for itself Is it just illusion? A passing thought? Confusion? Ch. So show me ... with your heart Lead me ... to your arms Tell me ... with your lips Let the love begin Inst. Ch. So show me ... with your heart Lead me ... to your arms Tell me ... with your lips Let the love begin
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Hi Vic:
Genre wise... it feels somewhere between Folk and Country. Really enjoyed my listen. Well done.
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Hi Vic
That is a fine pop love ballad to my ears but would be comfortable for a country artist too. Really evocative lyrics. You've created a nice arrangement. Your voice sounds good, and the harmonies in the chorus really step it up.
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Vic,
Another terrific song, from lyric to vocal to production, with great underlying emotion. Well done and good luck with this one. it deserves a lot of listens.
All the best,
Deej
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Thanks Dave.
Now I am confused. :-)
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Thank you Mike.
Someone ought to write a book on genres.
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Nice work Vic! I get a Bob Dylan feel to this, and that lyric is fire. Kudos on a job well done
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Nice one, Vic. A good listen.
fj
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Very nice song Vic. Well played and produced. Perhaps go up in key for the last chorus to really build the dynamics. Very nice song.
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Thank you for the listen and comment Deej.
Lots of listens would be nice.
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Hi James.
Never thought "Bob Dylan" but thank you.
Vic
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Thank you Floyd.
Good to have your thumbs up.
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Hey Vic,
Like I said in the other forum, sweet song, well written/performed. I could see Tom Petty doing this'n......well when he was around. I like the slow tempo, yet there's a feeling of "power" behind the music.
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Thanks Iggy.
You may have something there.
I'll try it.
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Genre? Maybe 60s pop ballad meets folk?
Nice sound though, a bit different from your usual leanings Vic but it works
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hi Eddy.
Thanks for the comment.
Shame about Tom.
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Real smooth, great feel Vic. I'd say it's a good contender for the death metal sea shanty genre...  Ricki
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Hi Calvin.
Nice of you to drop by. I can't smell any body odour. What did you do?
:-)
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Hi Travis.
Maybe you're right, or pop salad.
Thanks for the listen.
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Very nice. Moody and contemplative. Enjoyed that.
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Thank you Ricki.
Yes, they don't make the death metal sea shanties like they used to anymore.
Do you think it's ready for a come back?
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Those rhymes grabbed me from the get go.
We enjoyed the lyric, the vocal, the arrangement and the mix...all of it.
Nice!
J&B
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Haha! No fancy hose for me Calvin. Just socks, any colour ... as long as it's black or white.
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Hi Rainy day man.
Thank you for the comment, that sounds ok by me.
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Thank you J&B.
I appreciate that you like the lyric. Lyric is my favourite part.
Vic
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