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#1141561 - 06/07/18 03:43 PM Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up)  
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Devils Orchestra
v
It's party night in hell folks
welcome! There's music and dirty jokes.
Satan will be waving the baton
that Sid Vicious has kindly spat on.
v
Adolf Hitler's on first violin
little later they'll be more from him
Chairman Mao on percussion
With Rasputin and some other Russian
c
Hirohito, Satan's second in command
red hot trident in his hand
Will give wallflowers hell
if they're not up dancing,when he sounds the bells

V
Refreshments courtesy of Crippen
not just a doctor, he's a dietician
Burke and Hare dug up the dead
but tonight you can dig them instead
V
Vlad the Impaler Blackbeard the Sailor
Billy the Kid an Alcatraz jailer
Old Pol Pot banjo and slide guitar
Goreing wearing his wife's best bra
C
Hirohito, Satan's second in command
red hot trident in his hand
Will give wallflowers hell
if they're not up dancing,when he sounds the bells
v
Ivan the Terrible, Osama the s**t
Nero, fiddle and pumping armpits
Saddam on the xylophone
Himmler paper wrapped round a comb

b
The satanic choir are ready to rock n roll
v
Genghis Khan, Atilla the Hun
two raunchy bishops an unfrocked nun
Robespierre and Caligula
And a few other demonic regulars
c
Hirohito, Satan's second in command
red hot trident in his hand
Will give wallflowers hell
if they're not up dancing,when he sounds the bells
outro
So put another naked body on the fire
lets hear it loud for the Devils Orchestra and Choir

Last edited by Travis david; 06/08/18 04:05 AM.

We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1141597 - 06/08/18 02:35 PM Re: Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up) [Re: Travis david]  
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Hey Travis,

What a wicked concept ... I can see the dreadful orchestra now!
My suggestion would be to bring "good" into the song, so that somehow good is fighting evil and good wins, somehow, some way!
I don't know how to do that, though!

Lisa

#1141604 - 06/08/18 03:40 PM Re: Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up) [Re: Travis david]  
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This is just pure fun! Love the rhymes and imagery. Thanks for my daily laugh!

#1141631 - 06/09/18 05:46 AM Re: Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up) [Re: Travis david]  
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Hi Lisa welcome back.
We could do with some help around here.
Not thought of a good soul yet. They're few and far between
But it could be a contrast.
Perhaps someone could be sent by mistake
.cheers
Travis


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#1141632 - 06/09/18 05:47 AM Re: Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up) [Re: Travis david]  
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Hi Fallendiva
Good to know it had your chuckle muscles working
Cheers
Travis


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#1141667 - 06/09/18 08:58 PM Re: Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up) [Re: Travis david]  
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Travis,

Great idea for a song! I've got two suggestions for you to consider: First, the opening two lines are fairly generic. I'm wondering if you can get more to the point in those lines--and is it really "party night," which has less hellish connotations? Guess I'm suggesting that those opening lines are key.

My second thought--though it may be worthless depending on the music that goes with--is that the chorus focuses on Satan's second in command. Why not Satan himself? Seems like a focus on the big bad might fit more with the title. Just a thought--lose or use, as they say.

Regardless, very creative write. You've got my imagination going!

All the best,

Deej

#1141683 - 06/10/18 10:44 AM Re: Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up) [Re: Travis david]  
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LOL.....I can just picture this Band...Where is The Angel All Star Orchestra....? lol

#1141689 - 06/10/18 04:43 PM Re: Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up) [Re: Travis david]  
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Good points Deej.
I need a couple f rewrites on this taking in yours and Lisa idea
Cheers
Travis


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#1141690 - 06/10/18 04:43 PM Re: Devil's Orchestra(An old one I dug up) [Re: Travis david]  
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Thanks for the read through Barry
Cheers
Travis


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