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by Gary E. Andrews - 03/04/24 12:47 PM
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Serial Winner (Neil Cotton) https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v4/player.cfm?songID=13726907She’s…. A singing angel with perfect pitch A Guitar picker never muffed a riff Books a concert any where any time A million Youtube views online She’s a serial winner. Her life’s pure gold Never been second Always top drawer She’s a serial winner. Got a Midas touch Never took silver Don’t need no luck I saw her at the Starbuck’s shop Our eyes met my heart stopped I knew her from the MTV Stepped aside she’s in front of me She’s a serial winner. Her life’s pure gold Never been second Always top drawer She’s a serial winner. Got a Midas touch Never took silver Don’t need no luck My jaw dropped when she said I got this Then she asked where’d you want to sit l’m a serial winner. Life’s pure gold Never been second Always top drawer I'm a serial winner. Got a Midas touch Never took silver Don’t need no luck l’m a serial winner. life’s pure gold
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Good theme and song Neil Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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THANKS TRAVIS...VOCALS NEED WORK , AS USUAL. !!!!
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I'm sure you'll fix any nits
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If i think it is worthwhile. i.e. extra time.
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 05/19/18 08:08 PM.
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Neil,
Again, I like the lyrics here and you have the core of a good tune going on here. I'm the last to ask for production suggestions, but as I listened I was wondering what this would sound like slightly more uptempo. Not sure how easy that would be to play around with. Good luck with this one.
All the best,
Deej
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Neil,
Again, I like the lyrics here and you have the core of a good tune going on here. I'm the last to ask for production suggestions, but as I listened I was wondering what this would sound like slightly more uptempo. Not sure how easy that would be to play around with. Good luck with this one.
All the best,
Deej I will explore that possibility and compare, thanks
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