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This is my latest track that I have produce. I've done this track with the intention of submitting it to a music producer to have it played on one of his annual jazz shows. Need feedback https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/living
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Needs more variation, dynamics IMHO
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Irwin, I'm not very good with genres but this didn't really feel like jazz to me, if that's what you were going for. It is repetitious so keeping it short like you did is probably a good idea but it has a light, optimistic feel that I enjoyed listening to.
Ricki
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Hello Irwin, You're sounding good, but I kept waiting for a big trumpet to come into the scene ! Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Nice little Jam enjoyed the vibe thanks
Anthony
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Needs more variation, dynamics IMHO
Thanks for the feedback Neil.
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Irwin, I'm not very good with genres but this didn't really feel like jazz to me, if that's what you were going for. It is repetitious so keeping it short like you did is probably a good idea but it has a light, optimistic feel that I enjoyed listening to.
Ricki Thank for listening Ricki, I appreciate you comment.
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Yes Calvin, I thought about that too while creating this track (So, I understand what you are saying) But I just decided to keep it simple. Thanks for listening. Irwin
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Nice little Jam enjoyed the vibe thanks
Anthony Hi Anthony, You said you enjoyed the vibe and I am glad you did. Thanks for clicking on my post to have a listen. I appreciate. Irwin
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