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#1140174 - 04/24/18 08:13 AM Mistakes  
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The sum total of my mistakes is what got me here.

A little history...


MISTAKES

man, i made a mess of montreal
i fought and failed in philly
denver was a dead end
and jersey, hell, that was just silly
nearly found that nashville rainbow
until it all came undone
somehow i landed here in paridise
all sand and sea and sun

   bumps and bruises and bad breaks
   been bounced along the way
   but all and all I'd say I've had a ball
   the sum total of my mistakes
   is what got me here today
   so maybe they weren't mistakes at all

teri really turned my head
man i thought i was in love
when that fell through i took up with tammy
what the hell was i thinking of
broken promises and broken hearts
all played out in song
figured i was destined for lonely
and then... you came along

   bumps and bruises and bad breaks
   been bounced along the way
   but all and all I'd say I've had a ball
   the sum total of my mistakes
   is what got me here today
   so maybe they weren't mistakes at all

it's been a great life...
no mistake at all



Hope you enjoy the journey. (I have).
Comments welcome.

floyd

Last edited by floyd jane; 04/24/18 08:15 AM.
#1140184 - 04/24/18 09:14 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hi Floyd:

'Nuther great modern Country Song with enough feel to it for Traditional Country Buffs to enjoy. Bravo and best of luck with it. ----Dave

(Show me a man who never made a mistake... and I'll show you a man who never tried! LOL!)

#1140190 - 04/24/18 10:08 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Love it!!!
Trop Rock radio is waiting for this.

#1140191 - 04/24/18 10:11 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Love it!!!
Trop Rock radio is waiting for this.

#1140194 - 04/24/18 10:24 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Do you feel this one is shades of, say, Luke Bryan? I interpret this as an anthem for one who delights in words, connections, and variety. There is certainly a lot of that in this one.

#1140197 - 04/24/18 12:18 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Beautiful song Floyd.
Outstanding arrangement and solid production.

no MISTAKES here


Yeah, that's me... bang'n and yell'n... my apologies [Linked Image]
#1140207 - 04/24/18 03:53 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hi Floyd.

Great!
"the sum total of my mistakes
is what got me here today"
That just about sums it all up for us.

Vic


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#1140221 - 04/24/18 06:52 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hi Floyd, always a pleasure to hear your songs, a unique way to look at the trials in life. it seems like its always about the writing for me, and the music a bonus. you always do a great job on both. Lane


"Grace always pours from a closing wound"
#1140229 - 04/24/18 09:43 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Floyd,

Terrific (and true) write and great production on this song. It gives me a just a glimpse of what Bruce may have sounded if he did some country—and I really like the view. Very well done!

Kind regards,

Deej

#1140237 - 04/25/18 12:54 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Nice county song Floyd, The lyric it is well written.

#1140239 - 04/25/18 02:41 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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That's very nice. Great message that everyone can relate to (including me!) and a very entertaining listen.

#1140241 - 04/25/18 03:26 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hello Floyd,


Wow, you're sounding good.



Calvin


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#1140250 - 04/25/18 09:07 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: Neil Cotton]  
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Originally Posted by Dave Rice
Hi Floyd:

'Nuther great modern Country Song with enough feel to it for Traditional Country Buffs to enjoy. Bravo and best of luck with it. ----Dave

(Show me a man who never made a mistake... and I'll show you a man who never tried! LOL!)


Thanks for having a listen, Dave...


Originally Posted by Neil Cotton
Love it!!!
Trop Rock radio is waiting for this.


Glad to see you drop in, Neil...

#1140256 - 04/25/18 02:13 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: beechnut79]  
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Originally Posted by beechnut79
Do you feel this one is shades of, say, Luke Bryan? I interpret this as an anthem for one who delights in words, connections, and variety. There is certainly a lot of that in this one.


Brian - thanks for having a listen. I am not really very familiar with Luke Bryan. Heard things occasionally on the radio, but they don't stick with me. I listen to a lot of new music (mostly Country) - but it is generally streaming new records that catch my ear. I'm listening to the new Ashley McBryde and the new Brothers Osborne records - both are excellent.

#1140257 - 04/25/18 03:51 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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What a fantastic lyric and a great melody and production to boot. Didn't realize you were a neighbor Floyd. Glad you found your way to sunny Florida. That wasn't a mistake after all.

Dave

#1140271 - 04/25/18 10:50 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: Nelson]  
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Originally Posted by Nelson
Beautiful song Floyd.
Outstanding arrangement and solid production.

no MISTAKES here


Thanks, Nelson...

#1140292 - 04/26/18 10:02 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: Deej56]  
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Originally Posted by Vicarn
Hi Floyd.

Great!
"the sum total of my mistakes
is what got me here today"
That just about sums it all up for us.

Vic


Thanks, Vic...

Originally Posted by lane1777
Hi Floyd, always a pleasure to hear your songs, a unique way to look at the trials in life. it seems like its always about the writing for me, and the music a bonus. you always do a great job on both. Lane


Appreciate that, Lane...


Originally Posted by Deej56
Floyd,

Terrific (and true) write and great production on this song. It gives me a just a glimpse of what Bruce may have sounded if he did some country—and I really like the view. Very well done!

Kind regards,

Deej


smile That's a mighty nice thing to say, Deej...

#1140312 - 04/27/18 05:07 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Cool, Floyd, a philosophy I subscribe to myself. It's a shame more people don't take responsibility for their choices. Nice!

Ricki

#1140313 - 04/27/18 06:36 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Nice groove Floyd. wink

#1140317 - 04/27/18 09:54 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hey Floyd,

Love the genuineness of your vocal attitude. Great song & story.

Life can be and is more fun when we look back at the roller coaster ride and realize working for our goals is actually part of the fun. The disappointments actually enhance the highs, and means you're really "living!" It appears to me with those that seem to have everything to make them happy end up bored & "grumpy" anyway! We songwriters all want an audience, most of us won't get as big an audience as we dream about, but small audiences still can be heartwarming and very rewarding. One thing is for sure, there's a lot of talent in this world, and only a few get the lucky ticket to go to the big party--if there's anyone around here that deserves in that party--IMO, its you.............

steady-eddie

#1140338 - 04/28/18 04:34 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: GocartMoz]  
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Originally Posted by Irwin
Nice county song Floyd, The lyric it is well written.


Thanks, Irwin...



Originally Posted by RainyDayMan
That's very nice. Great message that everyone can relate to (including me!) and a very entertaining listen.


Thanks for having a listen, Owen...


Originally Posted by Calvin
Hello Floyd,


Wow, you're sounding good.



Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart


Thanks for saying so, Calvin.....



Originally Posted by GocartMoz
What a fantastic lyric and a great melody and production to boot. Didn't realize you were a neighbor Floyd. Glad you found your way to sunny Florida. That wasn't a mistake after all.

Dave


Appreciate all of that, Dave...

#1140363 - 04/29/18 02:46 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: E Swartz]  
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Originally Posted by Ricki E. Bellos
Cool, Floyd, a philosophy I subscribe to myself. It's a shame more people don't take responsibility for their choices. Nice!

Ricki


Thanks for having a listen, Ricki...


Originally Posted by Martin Lide
Nice groove Floyd. wink


Thanks, Martin. (Groove is not really something I ever think about....)



Originally Posted by E Swartz
Hey Floyd,

Love the genuineness of your vocal attitude. Great song & story.

Life can be and is more fun when we look back at the roller coaster ride and realize working for our goals is actually part of the fun. The disappointments actually enhance the highs, and means you're really "living!" It appears to me with those that seem to have everything to make them happy end up bored & "grumpy" anyway! We songwriters all want an audience, most of us won't get as big an audience as we dream about, but small audiences still can be heartwarming and very rewarding. One thing is for sure, there's a lot of talent in this world, and only a few get the lucky ticket to go to the big party--if there's anyone around here that deserves in that party--IMO, its you.............

steady-eddie


eddie - Gosh! That is a really super nice thing to say! I do appreciate it....

#1140366 - 04/29/18 06:03 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Another fantastic lyrical hook, Floyd.

This has a Jimmy Buffet feel to it for me -maybe because there are no regrets in it.

And that chorus is really catchy! You're probably getting as tired of hearing this as I am of saying it - but this really should be on the radio. grin

Scott

#1140375 - 04/30/18 06:53 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: Scott Campbell]  
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Originally Posted by Scott Campbell
Another fantastic lyrical hook, Floyd.

This has a Jimmy Buffet feel to it for me -maybe because there are no regrets in it.

And that chorus is really catchy! You're probably getting as tired of hearing this as I am of saying it - but this really should be on the radio. grin

Scott


Thanks, Scott... music to my ears smile - really nice to have someone (particularly someone who writes so well) think that something is worthy of radio play...

#1140384 - 05/01/18 08:13 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Great Lyric Floyd.
I thought the verse melody was good but was a little disappointed that the chorus didn't explode more but I really liked it.

#1140388 - 05/01/18 09:44 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Great theme Floyd. A mixture of traditional country and more contemporary.
Well done.
Best of luck with it
Travis


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Nice one Floyd, some mistakes never go away though. It wasn't a mistake listening, but that crack about Jersey.....

How do u get biab to play that descending line? Do you enter the chords with a bass note like c/g?

I was looking for a bridge, I might have done the solo with a different chord progression, but I enjoyed it as is.

#1140493 - 05/03/18 04:11 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: Fdemetrio]  
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Originally Posted by Barry David Butler
Great Lyric Floyd.
I thought the verse melody was good but was a little disappointed that the chorus didn't explode more but I really liked it.


Barry - thanks for stopping by. I didn't think of this as a "explode chorus" type song....


Originally Posted by Travis david
Great theme Floyd. A mixture of traditional country and more contemporary.
Well done.
Best of luck with it
Travis


Thanks, Travis



Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Nice one Floyd, some mistakes never go away though. It wasn't a mistake listening, but that crack about Jersey.....

How do u get biab to play that descending line? Do you enter the chords with a bass note like c/g?

I was looking for a bridge, I might have done the solo with a different chord progression, but I enjoyed it as is.


FD - Thanks for the listen. Yeah - you can walk a bass line up or down by entering slash chords.- C C/B Am Am/G F will give you a nice walk down. Some guitars and some pianos will play them, too (some do not)... pairing the ones that do can give a big walk down sound... I don't ever change to a different chord pattern for a solo - always a chunk of the verse or chorus... (and I really like this particular solo...

#1140612 - 05/08/18 08:14 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Sounding fantastic,Floyd.I'm likin' the lyrics here. Mike

#1140656 - 05/11/18 12:30 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Good song, man!
I can relate......as most who are out there fighting the good fight.
Kudos with the stellar concept, and the good write. Good recording, as well. My best....you gotta good song, here!
-Tom

#1140675 - 05/12/18 08:47 AM Re: Mistakes [Re: IronKnee]  
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Originally Posted by Michael LeBlanc
Sounding fantastic,Floyd.I'm likin' the lyrics here. Mike


Mike - thanks for stopping in!...



Originally Posted by IronKnee
Good song, man!
I can relate......as most who are out there fighting the good fight.
Kudos with the stellar concept, and the good write. Good recording, as well. My best....you gotta good song, here!
-Tom


Appreciate that, Tom... And thanks for dropping in to "Working On My Broken Heart" as well....

#1140692 - 05/12/18 04:44 PM Re: Mistakes [Re: floyd jane]  
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Floyd

I love this one!

We have training wheels on until we get the feel of life--Sand and a little Salt Water will ease some of our miscues!

All of us have made the same MISTAKES, then we realize that's how we got here--still in the game!

Good luck with this one!

Mackie


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