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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Good enough for the chorus,never be a star V Mom always told her she had what it takes Mom was once a starlet, but never got the breaks So Jo grew up thinking she was made for better things pretty face, nice body,but that's not everything C Good enough for the chorus,never be a star Good enough for a bit of fun not to meet your ma Every time she tried - and she tried, but didn't get far Good enough for the chorus,never be a star V The man she really wanted to impress Chose someone else-so on the rebound took second best She didn't love him,thought she was too far above him One day she walked out on him just on a whim V Studio were looking for faces with character she passed the audition and they wanted her The years had gone by and TV ads help pay her rent second passenger on a bus,not the girl who wears the scent Chorus B She never made the grade and you might not know the face But she's been in every ad from unsightly spots to fish paste
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Last edited by Travis david; 02/21/18 09:31 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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I like the title, Travis. Snappy. A little wordy in places and could do with a little more show without tell.
Good start.
Vic
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