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#1136979 - 02/12/18 06:42 PM This Far  
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Highways. Heartaches. And some Harmonies.

Janice Merritt (of Janice & Bub) joins me on the harmonies for this.
(Bud recorded and added his processing to Janice's vocals - how we always do it...).


THIS FAR

the bed of this silverado holds everything i own
left the wintry coast of maine headed for as far away as i can go
trying to forget your face, your touch, your kiss
all that i can think about is every inch of you i'm gonna miss
trying to outrun your memory
so why are you all that i can see

   28 hours straight i drive ... drive and drive and drive
   never looking back, 1800 miles south on 95
    from bar harbour maine to this sun bleached key west bar
    i never dreamed a heartache
   could stretch this far

all these tourist watching a lover's sunset
paying no attention to the broken man and his regrets
i've lost track of the tears i've shed
god knows how many beers i've had trying to get you out of my head
as far away as i could run
when will this be done

    28 hours straight i drove ... to find a place to hide
   never looking back, 1800 miles south on 95
   from bar harbour maine to this sun bleached key west bar
    i never dreamed a heartache
    could stretch this far

a broken heart in paradise
is still a broken heart

    from bar harbour maine to this sun bleached key west bar
    i never dreamed a heartache
    could stretch this far




Hope you enjoy the trip.
Comments welcome.

floyd

#1136982 - 02/12/18 07:16 PM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Impressive write and performance. Sounds radio ready to me... and if it isn't a 10, it's a 9.999 and J&B added just the right touch on the harmonies and audio. Wow! The trip down the coast from Maine was wonderful. I had to jump off at the exit to St. Simon's Island to go collect some memories... 'cause I've seen Key West, LOL!

So glad to have you guys here again... bringing some real class to this tired old juke joint. Play it again, would ya, Floyd? ----Dave

#1136984 - 02/12/18 07:40 PM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Man, I feel like I have heard this one before and loved it.

Oh, wait. I have! And I still do!

Great one Floyd.


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#1136999 - 02/12/18 11:28 PM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Floyd,

Cool write and sound! Love the harmonies on this one. Something good going on with this one.

Kindest regards,

Deej

#1137016 - 02/13/18 05:51 AM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hello Floyd,


You sure did a nice job here, thanks for sharing what you do.


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#1137019 - 02/13/18 05:56 AM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Good one Floyd great climb to the harmony which was excellent too
Yes loved it
Travis


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#1137021 - 02/13/18 06:06 AM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Well crafted composition, with a solid story line and catchy chorus. Great production and love the backing vocals. Nice job, well done

Kevin

#1137047 - 02/13/18 01:49 PM Re: This Far [Re: Deej56]  
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Originally Posted by Dave Rice
Impressive write and performance. Sounds radio ready to me... and if it isn't a 10, it's a 9.999 and J&B added just the right touch on the harmonies and audio. Wow! The trip down the coast from Maine was wonderful. I had to jump off at the exit to St. Simon's Island to go collect some memories... 'cause I've seen Key West, LOL!

So glad to have you guys here again... bringing some real class to this tired old juke joint. Play it again, would ya, Floyd? ----Dave

Thanks, Dave... I certainly appreciate all that nice stuff...


Originally Posted by David Snyder

Man, I feel like I have heard this one before and loved it.

Oh, wait. I have! And I still do!

Great one Floyd.

smile smile smile



Originally Posted by Deej56
Floyd,

Cool write and sound! Love the harmonies on this one. Something good going on with this one.

Kindest regards,

Deej

Thanks, Deej...

#1137048 - 02/13/18 03:05 PM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Hi Floyd.
That's how to sing a good country song.
That's how to do it all.
Vic


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#1137148 - 02/14/18 09:18 AM Re: This Far [Re: kevinism]  
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Originally Posted by Deej56
Floyd,

Cool write and sound! Love the harmonies on this one. Something good going on with this one.

Kindest regards,

Deej


Originally Posted by Travis david
Good one Floyd great climb to the harmony which was excellent too
Yes loved it
Travis


Originally Posted by kevinism
Well crafted composition, with a solid story line and catchy chorus. Great production and love the backing vocals. Nice job, well done

Kevin


Hey y’all, thanks for mentioning the harmony. It was fun!

Janice


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#1137159 - 02/14/18 09:40 AM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Floyd, once again you've gotten to the heart of the matter, as you so often do.

i never dreamed a heartache
could stretch this far

Apparently heartache can reach anywhere and and sometimes last forever. Well done, all around.

Ricki

#1137175 - 02/14/18 11:35 AM Re: This Far [Re: kevinism]  
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Originally Posted by Calvin
Hello Floyd,


You sure did a nice job here, thanks for sharing what you do.


Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

Calvin - thanks....


Originally Posted by Travis david
Good one Floyd great climb to the harmony which was excellent too
Yes loved it
Travis

Thanks for stopping by, Travis...


Originally Posted by kevinism
Well crafted composition, with a solid story line and catchy chorus. Great production and love the backing vocals. Nice job, well done

Kevin

Appreciate that, Kevin...

#1137213 - 02/15/18 08:14 AM Re: This Far [Re: Janice_and_Bud]  
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Originally Posted by Vicarn
Hi Floyd.
That's how to sing a good country song.
That's how to do it all.
Vic


Certainly appreciate that, Vic...


Originally Posted by Janice & Bud

...

Hey y'all, thanks for mentioning the harmony. It was fun!

Janice


And a huge "Thank You!" to you for joining me!!!



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#1137261 - 02/15/18 07:20 PM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Classic vibe here Floyd… a touching write.
I’m digging that rhythm guitar chucking on the right and the cool crying electric throughout.

Over all you hit the sweet spot production wise.
You and Janice got something really special vocally.

(heading south on i-95)
Yeah, I got that… on some ole line… of some ole song… somewhere in my ole songbook. smile

Another great job Bud


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#1137264 - 02/15/18 08:39 PM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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"i never dreamed a heartache
could stretch this far"

Maybe it's just peculiar to my sensibilities. As I am writing this, I have only read the lyrics and not heard the song...and I think that quotation is f'king awesome.

Martn

#1137272 - 02/16/18 01:02 AM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Excellent country rock song with solid performances.

I wish I could belt out my tunes like you belted out this one. You really put some umph in the vocals, and they sound good. The instrumentals are all very solid as well.

You might want to consider naming this tune "Drive." The chorus about driving is the strong suit of this tune, and, although the line about heartbreak is a great line, I think "Drive" captures the song's essence better. I would even repeat the chorus with the repeated "drive and drive and drive" as this is awesome and catchy (and easy to sing along to!).

BTW, nice job on the harmonies, Janice!

Peace,
TC


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#1137322 - 02/16/18 09:16 PM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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Fabulous...........................!! Floyd!

steady-eddie

#1137404 - 02/18/18 04:38 PM Re: This Far [Re: Martin Lide]  
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Originally Posted by Ricki E. Bellos
Floyd, once again you've gotten to the heart of the matter, as you so often do.

i never dreamed a heartache
could stretch this far

Apparently heartache can reach anywhere and and sometimes last forever. Well done, all around.

Ricki

Thanks, Ricki...


Originally Posted by Nelson
Classic vibe here Floyd… a touching write.
I’m digging that rhythm guitar chucking on the right and the cool crying electric throughout.

Over all you hit the sweet spot production wise.
You and Janice got something really special vocally.

(heading south on i-95)
Yeah, I got that… on some ole line… of some ole song… somewhere in my ole songbook. smile

Another great job Bud

Nelson - we appreciate that...



Originally Posted by Martin Lide
"i never dreamed a heartache
could stretch this far"

Maybe it's just peculiar to my sensibilities. As I am writing this, I have only read the lyrics and not heard the song...and I think that quotation is f'king awesome.

Martn

smile Thanks Martin... I hope it held up on listening...

#1137427 - 02/19/18 02:34 AM Re: This Far [Re: floyd jane]  
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This was incredibly solid. Love that big chorus and harmonies. Great production. Very nice!

..ant


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#1137555 - 02/20/18 11:04 PM Re: This Far [Re: TC Perkins]  
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Originally Posted by TC Perkins
Excellent country rock song with solid performances.

I wish I could belt out my tunes like you belted out this one. You really put some umph in the vocals, and they sound good. The instrumentals are all very solid as well.

You might want to consider naming this tune "Drive." The chorus about driving is the strong suit of this tune, and, although the line about heartbreak is a great line, I think "Drive" captures the song's essence better. I would even repeat the chorus with the repeated "drive and drive and drive" as this is awesome and catchy (and easy to sing along to!).

BTW, nice job on the harmonies, Janice!

Peace,
TC


Thanks, TC. This one (obviously) didn't have obvious title. "Drive" has been done so many times before - and since I changed it the 2nd time around, it didn't seem quite right either... just one of those "weak title songs"... it happens sometimes... thanks for having a listen...

#1137695 - 02/23/18 10:00 AM Re: This Far [Re: ant]  
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Originally Posted by E Swartz
Fabulous...........................!! Floyd!

steady-eddie


Thanks, eddie....\



Originally Posted by ant
This was incredibly solid. Love that big chorus and harmonies. Great production. Very nice!

..ant

Appreciate that listen, ant....


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