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#1136576 - 02/08/18 03:31 PM Biggest Fan  
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It's been a while since posting. Went through the remodel from hell, which was more conducive to cursing than composing. (Say that five times fast!) Anyway, I challenged myself to write something "commercial" and came up with this.

Biggest Fan


Címon girl, letís blow this town
Drive off with the ragtop down
Like a 50ís movie in a big red Cadillac
You were always too good for this place
Oklahomaís Princess Grace
East or west coast - baby, nowís your chance

ĎCuz whoa-ooh-whoa Iím your biggest fan
And whoa-ooh-whoa I know you can
Do anything you wanna do
Lemme make those dreams come true
ĎCuz Iím your biggest fan

All those high school boys you knew
Wanted just one thing from you
They couldnít see past the pompoms and the skirt
The future was next Friday night
A cooler full of cold Bud Lite
Peel off honey, leave Ďem in the dirt

ĎCuz whoa-ooh-whoa Iím your biggest fan
And whoa-ooh-whoa I know you can
Do anything you wanna do
Lemme make those dreams come true
ĎCuz Iím your biggest fan

I know that you can make it on your own
But wouldnít it be better if youíre not alone?

I will always have your back
You can bet the bank on that
If they knock you down Iíll help you find your feet
Who knows what the future holds
Make it big and make it bold
Take my hand girl, come along with me.

ĎCuz whoa-ooh-whoa Iím your biggest fan
And whoa-ooh-whoa I know you can
Do anything you wanna do
Lemme make those dreams come true
ĎCuz Iím your biggest fan

Yes I am Ė Iím your biggest fan

c2018 JBevington

#1136578 - 02/08/18 04:57 PM Re: Biggest Fan [Re: fallendiva]  
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I like it!
Yes I do!

#1137000 - 02/13/18 12:35 AM Re: Biggest Fan [Re: fallendiva]  
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fallendiva,

Somehow I missed this one. Glad I circled back and found it, because it's killer. Lay those awesome lyrics down to some music--I'll be itching to hear it.

All the best,

Deej

#1137005 - 02/13/18 04:47 AM Re: Biggest Fan [Re: fallendiva]  
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Hi
The whoa etc made me think of S.T's Feel like a Woman.
Good lyric and story
Travis


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1137164 - 02/14/18 10:48 AM Re: Biggest Fan [Re: fallendiva]  
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A really good write well done friend.


Just a writer of words

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