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TIME
by Martin Lide. 02/15/19 02:16 PM
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Ashes
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#1136139 - 02/02/18 05:57 PM
Dancing Horses [lyric]
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this was so rough, re-working the song and a possible lyric change...thanks to you all for coming by and commenting, and your thoughts..Lane
Last edited by lane1777; 02/12/18 09:57 PM.
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#1136559 - 02/08/18 10:13 AM
Re: Dancing Horses [lyric]
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Hey! Cool to hear something a little different here on the boards. I LOVE the beat! It's very hypnotic and I actually like the lyrics as they are. I do think that the timing could be a little different on some of the lines. It seemed like you rushed a little through the first time you sang "isn't that men being men." And it would be cool to hear maybe a synth or some other instrument behind you just to break it up a little and not make it too monotonous. But other than that, I think you have a good start and I look forward to hearing this develop! Thanks for sharing!  Hi Cecilee your so right, I`m not much of a singer, and I didn`t want to put a lot of effort in this just showing the lyric. I have a friend that says the same thing about the writing. I don`t sing this loud enough, and I miss some of the words.. a word or two I need to drop too. hopefully it comes together..thanks so much Cecilee for commenting and listening.. Lane
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