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by ckiphen. 01/24/21 11:32 AM
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#1135044 - 01/15/18 02:28 PM
Lonely Room
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Michael LeBlanc
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Lonely Room
You can plant roses in my heart but it wouldn't matter Cause when you leave me the thorns would draw blood forever after And the rains only nourish the sorrow that only blooms Day after day,in my lonely room
You can paint a rainbow in the sky so beautifully formed But when you leave me in an instant i can't weather the storm And the never ending lightning flash and the rolling thunder's boom Rattles my heart,in my lonely room
In my lonely room,it's never easy You come and you go,it only scares me In my lonely room,here all alone Wondering how to stay,when you're gone In my lonely room
No matter the situation we have it's like a puzzle in the dark A piece goes missing it's always the piece leading to your heart I feel you're cheating at this game and i find out much later than soon At my time of thoughts,in my lonely room
In my lonely room,it's never easy You come and you go,it only scares me In my lonely room,here all alone Wondering how to stay,when you're gone In my lonely room In my lonely room In my lonely room
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#1137154 - 02/14/18 09:27 AM
Re: Lonely Room
[Re: Michael LeBlanc]
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Alanjack
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Just the word soon at the end of the line seems a bit odd although I don't know what you would replace it with to rhyme with room, everything else is wonderful.
Just a writer of words
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#1137155 - 02/14/18 09:28 AM
Re: Lonely Room
[Re: Michael LeBlanc]
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Alanjack
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Just the word soon at the end of the line seems a bit odd although I don't know what you would replace it with to rhyme with room, everything else is wonderful.
Just a writer of words
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