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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/04/24 12:47 PM
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A mix of an old lyric with many new things to it.
Attraction © 2017 Cindy Prince
So I picked up the dictionary Looking for a word to describe The spark between us That overwhelming vibe
Thought about connection No, that wouldn't do it So I kept searching Then suddenly I knew it
Chorus Attraction: (uh-trak-shuh n) Allurement to entice Fascination Ooo babe, this is nice It’s powerful And baby so quick Can’t resist you You’re so electric
Can't stop thinking about you Yeah babe, that's the facts Can't sleep without you There's no way to relax
My life has changed so much Since I first looked into your eyes That it would be attraction Comes as no surprise
2nd Chorus Attraction: (uh-trak-shuh n) Magnetic force Enticement You’ve changed my course Charged bodies We’re so drawn together Can’t go back, babe This is forever
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Hi Cindy,
I really like how you infused this with tons of energy!
I had a thought for the last verse, fourth line. Something like:
That WE'VE DEFINED attraction Comes as no surprise
Just a thought to keep or sweep!
Lisa
P.S. Just made a change ... I meant to say, "defined, " NOT "define!"
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Your lines fit together well, and that makes the lyric easy to read.
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Hey Cindy, where'd you go?
Brian Austin Whitney Founder Just Plain Folks jpfolkspro@gmail.com Skype: Brian Austin Whitney Facebook: www.facebook.com/justplainfolks"Don't sit around and wait for success to come to you... it doesn't know the way." -Brian Austin Whitney "It's easier to be the bigger man when you actually are..." -Brian Austin Whitney "Sometimes all you have to do to inspire humans to greatness is to give them a reason and opportunity to do something great." -Brian Austin Whitney
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I say that once in a while too! LOL (my wife being a Cindy).
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