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#1132807 - 11/25/17 12:51 PM I'll Miss  
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This one is about the fact that when someone exits our life there are things that we tend to miss about said person.


IíLL MISS

c2017 Brian Beecher


Iíll miss your buoyant laughter
You were just a crazy fool
Didnít believe you when you told me
You discovered a new tool

So determined to create some
Energy from a different space
Whereas before I was impatient
Now Iíll wait to see your face

Iíll miss the positive aspects
Of the life that we once knew
At the time there were so many
Hard to know which one to turn to

Iíll miss the way youíd guide me
To enjoy each days energies
And when I was feeling troubled
You would try so very hard to please

Iíll miss the days when you told me
That you had a lot to give
Learning to select words in a way so
More heartfelt and positive

Iíll miss when you said that just
As words have meanings so do thoughts
And how youíd put a smile on my face
With the kind of love you brought

Iíll miss the honest way you
Recognized where you had gone wrong
Determined to no longer walk that path
And try harder to get along

That itís possible to heal yourself and
Heal others at the same time
Then show others how you did it
And create a verse of rhyme

Iíll miss how youíd use your words to
Heal and build lasting bonds
Then youíd lure me out to nature
Where weíd kiss by the rippling pond

Iíll miss when we each had something
To contribute to conversation
Never a sign of weakness
But meant to keep more balanced

Iíll miss the way you held me
Somehow you had a magic touch
Never thought that you would leave me
When the going got too rough

Now determined to create some
Energy from yet a different space
You became the one impatient
Hope someday to see your face

#1132810 - 11/25/17 01:05 PM Re: I'll Miss [Re: beechnut79]  
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Quite a long write Brian.
As a suggestion I'd find a different phrase for positive aspects
Lyric wise it's not conversational or maybe it's me !
Travis.


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1132814 - 11/25/17 05:24 PM Re: I'll Miss [Re: beechnut79]  
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I like the message.

Having people no longer in our lives is always a bitter sweet mixture of missing them and remembering them.

Maybe it doesn't matter, but I find myself wondering if the person died or just moved away, or moved on.

oh, the verse with conversation and balanced does not rhyme like the other verses do.

#1132850 - 11/26/17 06:02 PM Re: I'll Miss [Re: beechnut79]  
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This is an idea that I had floated with for twenty years or more and finally got it down on paper. Hybrid of remembrances of different people both good and not so good.


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