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Designated fool v Another night, another bar keep on looking and still this glass won't tell me where you are v Another session on this stool Heard someone say See that guy? We call him the designated fool! c Those words cut through me like a knife can't even get being drunk right So true, but so cruel yeah laught at me, the designated fool v Ordered myself a final Jack Paid my tab and determined I won't be coming back v Boy it hurt others could set way she makes me feel Salvaged what little pride was left of me c Those words cut through me like a knife can't even get being drunk right So true, but so cruel yeah laugh at me, the designated fool
b Least I heard that wake up call why go through all this pain? it's over, she don't care at all starting today, a I'll start again c2 Those words cut through me like a knife can't even get being a drunk right So true, but so cruel No more the designated fool
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hi Travis..I like the concept..I hear this as a trad country song. I`m good with this! I`m going to go read the gospel songs, and comment, that genre don`t know, i`m not there much. Lane
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction, one might save you from the other...Vincent
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Travis,
Some superb lines here: "this glass won't tell me where you are" and "can't even be drunk right"--good stuff! Enjoyed the read.
Regards,
Deej
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Good idea Travis. Designated is a bit of a mouthful to sing so maybe another similar simpler word instead?
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there's lots of fools in this world and being designated hits the mark. Mike
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Thanks for comments Mike and Colin Designated is long admitted Colin but there lays the hook so it's not easy to change
Last edited by Travis david; 09/27/17 09:56 AM.
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