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#1130698 - 09/15/17 06:38 AM I'm her new daddy now  
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She walked out on the last one
she did the work he had the fun
The one before lost all they had
  Back room of the bar at Three Card Stud
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   At first we took it kinda slow
    weighed up all ways before  we'd go
     Third time around for me as well
       this time we slipped, we stumbled and fell
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       So I want to announce we're both happy
        I'm her new daddy now
         Making plans always holding hands
         Hey cupid take a bow.
          I'm her new daddy now
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      Folks watch us dance, whisper my oh my
          the way they look into each others eyes!
          Just to think they're on the rebound
yeah good news like bad news
don't take long to get 'round


        Chorus



         
     

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#1130704 - 09/15/17 08:06 AM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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like this Travis..I know i`m going to get to hear a little song when its finished. Lane


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#1130705 - 09/15/17 08:23 AM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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Cheers Lane
A rewrite on v3 and turning it into a bridge
Thanks for the read
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#1130707 - 09/15/17 08:27 AM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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you bet, sometimes I have to walk away from a write to finish it....know what I mean? I`ll go look at the verse. Lane


back... that should work Travis.

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#1130708 - 09/15/17 08:45 AM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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Thanks Lane a third verse needed probably
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#1130717 - 09/15/17 09:34 AM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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I`d say so Travis, or you`ll end up with one of those little "dittys" I sometimes write....lol good luck with this, should make a good song. Lane

and thank you for commenting on Put a little Jesus in it, I remember my Dad saying that,

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#1130718 - 09/15/17 10:19 AM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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Don't know quite how to analyze this one. The title suggests a daddy-daughter relationship yet the thoughts and words clearly indicate romance. But a lot of times a male spouse is also referred to as "daddy", maybe even if there are no children involved. At any rate the song suggests that it's great to be excited about all of the changes occurring in one's life. Too bad "happily ever after" doesn't always turn out.

#1130724 - 09/15/17 12:56 PM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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I think Daddy is a country thing Brian lol
Thanks for your comments and read through
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#1130725 - 09/15/17 01:00 PM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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I deleted the last but one line in the chorus and feel it reads smoother now
Travis


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#1130727 - 09/15/17 02:28 PM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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daddy is a big "slang term in music and lyric...lol hell in the world! "who`s your daddy.."babydaddy "sugardaddy so I got it right away..


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#1130740 - 09/16/17 03:59 AM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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I thought I'd join the ranks.
Strangely no songs can I see with this title


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I am guessing that this was meant to be a country song. Am I correct? About 60 percent of what I write is probably meant to be county, most of the rest of the remaining 40 leaning toward folk with the occasional blues mixed in.

#1130751 - 09/16/17 12:28 PM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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its does read smoother Travis,

hey 79..i think it is country..



just one thing Travis...in the chorus

So I want to announce we're both happy
I'm her new daddy now..................................................."something like..."Nothing we had before". or
"Nothing like we had before"


Making plans always holding hands
Hey cupid take a bow.
I'm her new daddy now

so there is not two lines the same in that chorus...but thats just me..

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#1130787 - 09/18/17 02:31 PM Re: I'm her new daddy now [Re: Travis david]  
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Reads fine Lane will consider it for the rewrite cheers.
Appreciate your help
Travis


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