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Hi all. This is a first for me. Never did a Christmas song before but Travis obviously thought it was time I did. Bah Humbug! After playing around with his lyrics a bit I managed to come up with this. Does it work? Vic I've now put a video together here: https://youtu.be/KpF-BGEr5eAhttps://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold/a-tumbleweed-christmas or http://sclk.co/s83wk7A Tumbleweed Christmas © 2017 John Vaughan & Vic Arnold V Everyone rushing to beat the snow fall While I sit at my window just watching them all And so when this old festive season holds sway for a tumbleweed, Christmas is just one more day V The big stores are pumping out popular tunes Well Bing, it looks like your dream will come true Snowflakes are settling like soft memories of a time before our love got lost in the freeze C The Salvation Army on the corner will play For a tumbleweed, this day drifts by at slow pace Christmas Eve's here but it doesn't feel right Oh I wish I had you to hold on to tonight V I'm not one of those who just stares at his beer I have a few friends. It's a shame they're not here. We could all share this night but they've places to go So I sit at my window and stare at the snow Ch. Br. Just for a second in the blink of an eye I swore she was here, darn it, now I could cry Maybe a shadow but I don't think it's mine Could tumbleweeds meet up on this Christmas time Chorus
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for a tumbleweed, Christmas is just one more day ...LOVE THIS LINE
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Thanks for the listen Neil Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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You guys are "on a roll" with this latest "offering:"
I listened and followed along the lyrics as Vic sang. I suppose if someone asked me to find the correct "genre pigeon-hole" for this one, "Christmas Blues" would be exactly where it lands. Too many clever lines to "highlight" but by the time we got to the end of the song, I was ready to go to the "fridge" and grab a "cold one." Mission accomplished, my friends. A bit sad... but so interesting... and it sure causes me to be grateful for not being alone at Christmas.
What's next, dynamic duo? Thanks for some super entertainment. ----Dave
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Thanks once again for your thumbs up Dave and positive comments Travis
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Thanks Neil. Glad it works.
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Thank you for your generous comment, Dave. I think you invented a new genre.
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Hi Vic, I like the traditional sound here, and the lyric excellent. I also thought your voice was clear. congrats you have a christmas song! Lane
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Hi Calvin Thanks once again for your support Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Thanks for your comments on the lyrics forum Lane and pleased you liked the completed song Travis
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Hi Calvin. You can't beat a WoW!
Thank you.
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Thank you Lane. I suppose being a Christmas song a little cliché is allowed, especially if it's just musically. Glad you found the time to comment. It's soooo quiet here lately.
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Yes those tweeks work Vic a little smoother!
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Well done guys...good call on the tempo and 3/4 time. Also, a different, fresh take on the Christmas theme. Cool!
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Cool Christmas tune Guys! Excellent recording/ production. August is a good month to peddle it. Good luck with it! Best, John
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Thanks Ricky.Your input is always welcome Travis
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Thanks Ricki. One of the reasons I did it was because of the different approach lined up by Travis. I'm glad it worked out.
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Thanks John. Peddle away.
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What a blue Christmas! So well written, a sad story and love the Bing line!
Vic, I love that deep tone, my favorite! That triangle sound is perfect to keep it in the Christmas genre. Love the emotional spots in this (like darn it), you sung it so well and told the story. This works for me and love the ending where you wish everyone a Merry Christmas!
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Thanks John ivery sent the song to a couple of people. You never know! Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hi Tammy. Thank you so much for such a nice comment. The Bing line was all Travis's. He also suggested I change "Damn it" to "Darn it".
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Cheers Tammi. Pleased you enjoyed this one Travis
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Vic/Travis,
What a nice "country waltz" tune. Perfect for a video guys--you have time before Christmas, but you'd better hurry! Enjoyed this'n!
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Nice chilled melodic music on this song, hope your Christmas is better this year.
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Thanks Eddie. Whenever I make a video I'm always stumped for images. Most pro images are understandably expensive to purchase and still shots almost always look amateur. If time allows and the snow falls I may shoot my own.
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Thank you Life Rise. I hope so too.
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Cheers Ed.Great idea mate. Trav/John
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A great un-Christmas song you two. Excellent!
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Thanks Douglas. I like the "Un-Christmas" part.
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Hell yes.... it works for me. A wonderful performance/ production, Vic.
Warm and lovely write Travis.
Love the chorus.. "Christmas Eve's here but it doesn't feel right Oh I wish I had you to hold on to tonight"
Getting me in the mood quite early gents. Nice collab guys.
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Hi Nelson. Glad it put you in the mood. Thanks.
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Hi Vic and Travis, You guys; you're breaking my heart here! You make my smile for the subtle self-deprecating humor, and yet it's pretty sad and has that barroom swagger that few muster as well as Kris K and Roger M but this does and you do too, guys. Ah yes, I fondly remember the days of waltzing while holding on dearly..to a half finished bottle of beer.. Thanks for the memories. Great work. Love it.. Mike
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-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon) from the song "Songs of Love" from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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Ah .... Mike, you mentioned the Roger M. So pleased. I loved everything he did. We backed him and his guitarist, Thumbs Carlisle on the BBC radio when he came over in the 60's. No rehearsals. It was a fun but we knew his stuff anyway because we'd been doing it for a while. He asked if he could try out our guitarist's custom guitar(which he'd got free to promote it). After a few licks he gave it back with a dry, "Thank you, I'll stick with mine". Anyway, I digress. Thank you and so glad you appreciated our efforts.
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To anybody who read the last two posts and wondered "who is Roger M?"
That's Roger Miller, the King of the Road, the Master of the Two-Minute Ditty. Listen to "England Swings" once and you remember it for life.
What a wonderful time that must've been, Vic, backing such a class act and fun guy.
Mike
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-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon) from the song "Songs of Love" from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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Cheers Doug Hope you're feeling better now Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Thanks L.R. Appreciate your comments Travis
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Just wanted to stop in here, Vic and Travis, to say how much I enjoyed this one. Another great collaboration between the two of you. Keep it going!
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Thanks Mr. Nelson pleased you enjoyed our song. Thanks also for your support Travisuv
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Mike. One of my favourites of his for it's sheer nonsense is "Lou's got the flu" I have many fond memories of those days, Mike. Some, not so fond. Such is life.
Thanks again Vic
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Thank you, Deej. We try.
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Thanks once again Mike for the listen. My favourite song by the late lamented Roger Miller is Husbands and Wives. The lyrics are outstanding and equally carry a lot of truth. Check out the Everly Brothers version too Travis
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Hi Deej. Pleased you liked the song thanks for playing it and your commentsunami Travis
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Very touching - melancholy Christmas tune - brought a tear to my eye - the writing - melody and performance were excellent - thank you....Pete
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Hi Pete If it brought a tear to your eye or touched you. Then I'm happy! Thanks for the listen Travis
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Thanks Pete. I'm glad it brought a tear to your eye. Sort of. :-) I'll be posting a video soon. Vic
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Very good song and performance. I liked it a lot.
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Thanks Moose Pleased you enjoyed the song Travis
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Hi moose song. Your comment is much appreciated.
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Type of song Burl Ives could have sung years back
Nice Work Guys
Without the right music your clever lyrics will never be heard, if you want success be prepared to re write many times and even change the meter you chose originally
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