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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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i`m putting stuff here till the whole board is mine....lol Arona..... She danced the dances on star filled nights painting portraits in the glow All young men gather to her side wish to gain her love. Shocking truth of a forbidden fruit you've known it all along. Still you watch from the fire's edge in hope it's you she calls. A wail so piercing earth has hidden you stand so all alone. Drenching rains of color unfold that numb your very soul. She pulls the blade so moist and blood red nothing has had it's effect. An alarming last view black endless depths... Love is beautiful, Isn't it?...Lane
Last edited by lane1777; 09/05/17 01:49 PM.
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A young man's urgent yearning blinds his once keen vision. His itching ears hear love's promises but the voice is his own. His quest for the end of pain has only found the beginning of it.
Empathic identification and psychodynamic integration pull the writer and the reader together in dance, but each to their own music.
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another human here....lol didn`t think that was going to happen. Thank you for commenting Perry. I found myself in this precarious position except for the endless depths, I had sense enough to run.....lol Lane
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"I'm putting stuff here till the whole board is mine" Yes....about this God complex lane.... LOL
I liked it; perhaps the first two verses better than the last but not disturbing. Interesting can be good! -Mike
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the whole thing is a little off the wall Mike, but I was still recovering....lol I got stuff I`m still trying to figure out and I wrote it....lol thanks for taking time to read and comment Mike. Lane
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction, one might save you from the other...Vincent
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