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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Like A Shoe With A Stone Inside (Vaughn & Cotton)
Playing the field one goal in sight Chasing the ladies Losing track of time
Done so many things that I ain't proud of with the only reason, being just because
Like a shoe with a stone inside My guilt tells me how I lived a lie Seen enough of the city sights All that I want to see tonight Are the lights of home …. And you
As an aside to running around Are boozing and betting No one trusts me now
Done so many things again and again When I count my fingers, can't count a friend
Like a shoe with a stone inside My guilt tells me how I lived a lie Seen enough of the city sights All that I want to see tonight Are the lights of home …. And you
Through the haze where I was trapped I heard those calls you made each day I ought to have made a few taps And say I'm coming home OK?
Like a shoe with a stone inside My guilt tells me how I lived a lie Seen enough of the city sights All that I want to see tonight Are the lights of home …. And you
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Shoe with a stone
Playing the field scaling the heights losing track of time Daytime merging to night
Done so many things that I ain't proud of with the only reason, just because
Feels like a shoe with a stone inside Reminding me how I lived a lie Seen enough of the city sites feeling alone All that I want to see now is the lights of home
Yes there were ladies by the score and I had no pride kept an open back door
Done so many things again and again when I counted my fingers,couldnt count a friend
Feels like a shoe with a stone inside Reminding me of how I used to live a lie Seen enough of the city sights that I combed All that I want to see now is the lights of home
And through the haze that often lingered I heard the same song. Didn't know the singer Got all the letters I should have replied too but it only took one to say,I'm coming home to you
Chorus
---------------------------'--''' Played the field scaled the hights lost track of time Missed daytime merging to night
Done so many things that I ain't proud of with the only answer just because
Feels like a shoe with a stone in Reminding me of how I used to live Seen enough of the city sights that I combed All that I want to see now is the lights of home
There were ladies by the score I weren't proud But made them know mines a swinging door
Done so many things again and again when I counted my fingers,could count a friend
Feels like a shoe with a stone in Reminding me of how I used to live Seen enough of the city sights that I combed All that I want to see now is the lights of home
And through the haze that often lingered I heard the same song. Didn't know the singer Got all the letters I should have replied too but it only took one to say,I'm coming g home to you
Feels like a shoe with a stone in Reminding me of how I used to live Seen enough of the city sights that I combed All that I want to see now is the lights of home
Last edited by Travis david; 09/11/17 10:09 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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This has some potential Travis.
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Just putting this out...not that it is better, just different.
Like A Shoe With A Stone Inside (Vaughn & Cotton)
Playing the field one goal in sight Chasing the ladies Losing track of time
Done so many things that I ain't proud of with the only reason, being just because
Like a shoe with a stone inside My guilt tells me how I lived a lie Seen enough of the city sights All that I want to see tonight Are the lights of home …. And you
As an aside to running around Are boozing and betting No one trusts me now
Done so many things again and again When I count my fingers, can't count a friend
Like a shoe with a stone inside My guilt tells me how I lived a lie Seen enough of the city sights All that I want to see tonight Are the lights of home …. And you
Through the haze where I was trapped I heard those calls you made each day I ought to have made a few taps And say I'm coming home OK?
Like a shoe with a stone inside My guilt tells me how I lived a lie Seen enough of the city sights All that I want to see tonight Are the lights of home …. And you
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 09/01/17 08:50 PM.
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see above!
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 09/01/17 03:11 PM.
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Thanks Neil Like your take
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Travis,
You have a knack for coming up with some great song tiles and refrains--this one is no exception. There's so much potential here with what you have in mind, and you've already made some good changes in the rewrites. Looking forward to how the final turns out.
Regards,
Deej
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Cheers Deej. Appreciate your read and comoments Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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