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#1129785 - 08/12/17 08:49 AM I love a storm  
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- Select One - houston, texas...
Needs music and vocals.


I love a storm
Verse
I saw the flags a-flying.
I heard the siren’s wail.
I should’ve gone in hiding
But I hoisted the sail.
The wind began a-blowing.
The rain came pouring down.
I knew that I was going;
That I was going down.
Chorus
She’s a hurricane, a twister;
my sister’s best friend.
I’m in too deep to turn around
sail against the wind.
She’s turbulent, she’s dangerous
lord I love a storm.
Verse
I knew about the warnings.
They said you better flee
But I was mesmerized with
The way she looked at me.
The seas began a- rolling;
My ship was going down.
I knew that I was going;
That I was going down.
Chorus
She’s a hurricane, a twister;
my sister’s best friend.
I’m in too deep to turn around
sail against the wind.
She’s turbulent, she’s dangerous
lord I love a storm.
Verse
She wrapped her arms around me.
She wouldn’t let me go.
It was way too late to leave;
Too hard to break her hold.
I loved her and she knew it.
She loved me even more.
She touched her lips to my lips
So soft so moist and warm.
Chorus
She’s a hurricane, a twister;
my sister’s best friend.
I’m in too deep to turn around
sail against the wind.
She’s turbulent, she’s dangerous
lord I love a storm.

Tag
I’ve always, yes I’ve always
always loved a storm.


Carroll Kiphen
#1129816 - 08/13/17 07:54 AM Re: I love a storm [Re: stranger]  
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Hi Stranger,

I like this -- nice write! I like how he's stuck in the storm and loving it!
In the chorus, line two could be, "the best friend of my sister" -- to rhyme with the twister ... although the way you have it sounds more conversational!

Also, welcome to JPF!

Lisa

#1129818 - 08/13/17 09:28 AM Re: I love a storm [Re: stranger]  
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Good metaphor use here.
The lyrics read easily.

Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

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#1129819 - 08/13/17 09:35 AM Re: I love a storm [Re: stranger]  
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Hey, this is really good! smile


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