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#1129068 - 07/15/17 01:56 PM Apart  
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they say this section does not get enough attention...lol...I`l just keep posting and reading.

[these are just little clips in life, I try to pretty them up.]



Apart

A notion that had lifted
heart and piece of the soul,
the crime had no beginning
held on to and end.

A meaningless breeze it was,
rush past all good
buries itself in infractions
hurried on.

It had come to words
without sorrow,
the eager peace one seeks.
It had come to a sad thing
and left me apart..


Copyright Vincent


"Grace always pours from a closing wound"
#1129608 - 08/06/17 08:30 PM Re: Apart [Re: lane1777]  
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Lane,

The last verse is really strong; there are some beautiful lines throughout. I get lost in the first verse, though, and the second doesn't help illuminate. It kind of leave me wondering . . . which may be the point. At any rate, take my comment for what they are worth--enjoyed the read.

Regards,

Deej

#1129637 - 08/07/17 01:45 PM Re: Apart [Re: lane1777]  
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thanks DJ for commenting, a person once told me to let the reader form the image, or make the decision


"Grace always pours from a closing wound"
#1129648 - 08/07/17 03:48 PM Re: Apart [Re: lane1777]  
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Looks like poetry, Lane.
It could mean many things and I'm sure you know what they are.
Could also be the bones of a decent song.

A notion that had lifted
heart and mind and soul,
was a crime with no beginning
and no place left to go

Don't mind me, I just like playing with lyrics.

Vic


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#1129654 - 08/07/17 05:00 PM Re: Apart [Re: lane1777]  
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thanks Vic, for taking time to comment, sometimes Vic I get back to the past, I was trying to say when two people start something good, little chips" erode it,,, not paying attention, and it can turn meaningless..and have you apart"

if there is a line or two you Like Vic..feel welcome to use them, no big thing. thanks again Lane


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