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#1129611 - 08/06/17 08:54 PM She's Got a Good Heart  
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She’s Got a Good Heart

(V) My buddies say my baby’s
got some marbles out of place.
My Momma says she doesn’t
have such a pretty face.
She’s got a laugh that makes
an otter sound like Princess Di;
an eye for fashion that
could make both Versaces cry.

(C) But my baby’s got a good heart,
and that’s everything.
She’s got a good heart—
I don’t care what you say.
She’s got a good heart,
and that’s everything,
She’s got a good heart.

(Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah)

(B) You never see her
when the lights go down;
when the whole world’s sleeping
and no one’s around.
That’s when she says
the really sweet stuff;
that’s when I know
I know complete love.
And the really, really best part is

(C) baby’s got a good heart,
and that’s everything.
She’s got a good heart—
I don’t care what you think
She’s got a good heart,
and that’s everything,
She’s got a good heart.

(Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah)

(V) My buddies all like their
ladies firm and slim.
And I know my baby’s body
has never even seen a gym.
She maybe drinks a little more
than a lady should.
And those funny cigarettes
don’t do her any good, but my

(C) baby’s got a good heart,
and that’s everything.
She’s got a good heart—
I don’t care what you think
She’s got a good heart,
and that’s everything,
She’s got a good heart.

(B) You never see her
when the lights go down;
when the whole world’s sleeping
and no one’s around.
That’s when she says
the really sweet stuff;
that’s when I know
I know complete love.
And the very, very best part is

(C) baby’s got a good heart,
and that’s everything.
She’s got a good heart—
I don’t care what you think
She’s got a good heart,
and that’s everything,
She’s got a good heart.

(Yeah, Yeah, Yeah)

(c) DJ Lekich 2017

#1129613 - 08/06/17 09:55 PM Re: She's Got a Good Heart [Re: Deej56]  
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Love the sentiment and the lyric catches it with just the right combination of affection and humor. It will make a great song.

#1129650 - 08/07/17 03:54 PM Re: She's Got a Good Heart [Re: Deej56]  
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I have some friends like this, no certain person.. I love them. .hope I get to hear it. hope all is good in your world Dee.
and It should make a good love song.... Lane


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#1129653 - 08/07/17 04:25 PM Re: She's Got a Good Heart [Re: Deej56]  
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It looks like it's all there, Deej.
Maybe a little rocker.

Vic


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#1129667 - 08/08/17 02:02 AM Re: She's Got a Good Heart [Re: Deej56]  
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Looks good Dee . Quite long but well constructed
Travis


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#1129700 - 08/09/17 01:49 AM Re: She's Got a Good Heart [Re: Deej56]  
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Thanks Gavin, Lane, Vic, and Travis for the feedback. I’ve started trying to record this one—but I already know I want to redo the vocals so was interested in getting some feedback on the lyrics before I did so. Really appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.

Vic, nice instincts, as this is indeed an uptempo, rock like tune. I’m just going to struggle making it sound like I hear it as I'm production challenged. But I’ll put this out there at some point for better or worse.

Travis, yes, it reads long, but actually moves quite quickly when played--just a little over three minutes currently (though I think I’m playing a bit fast--so maybe more like 3:30 all in). Then again, if it's not something I feel good sharing, it may never see the light of day. We'll see.

Thanks to you all for your input.

Best regards,

Deej


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