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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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A young or an old man's fantasy ! A Name I’ll Never Divulge To You (Neil Cotton) I paddled my kayak down a river so serene I glided to a stop cause of what I’d seen There were 2 ladies in a swimming hole They waved me over nearly had a stroke You think I’m kidding but a stroke's no joke. It’s a lonely river With a stunning view A name I’ll never Divulge to you Please no visitors No sneak previews A name I’ll never Divulge to you I paddled on further after frolickin’ Not too far just up around the bend In the sun a pretty gal sang on the bank She waved me over pulled in my kayak I’m not kidding she pulled in my kayak It’s a lonely river With a stunning view A name I’ll never Divulge to you Please no visitors No sneak previews A name I’ll never Divulge to you You might not blab but I can’t take a chance If you went there you would understand why I will not share where I found Ruby, Pearl, & sweet Sapphire It’s a lonely river With a stunning view A name I’ll never Divulge to you Please no visitors No sneak previews A name I’ll never Divulge to you
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Neal thats such a nice story and lyric, I don`t see one thing wrong in this work, "Hats off. Lane
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction, one might save you from the other...Vincent
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A good story apart from nearly having a stroke lol
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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A good story apart from nearly having a stroke lol Ya, a strokes no joke. I really don't know what this...it just is. LOL
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Never heard it called a Kayak before Neil....but whatever floats your boat!
Fun lyric, nicely written. Stream of consciousness? All the best! -Mike
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Never heard it called a Kayak before Neil....but whatever floats your boat!
Fun lyric, nicely written. Stream of consciousness? All the best! -Mike Pretty much a stream LOL...not much prep...a bit of the double entendre eh? Ever go to Picton? Millpond Country Jamboree Aug. 27..
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 07/23/17 08:58 PM.
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